All Comments on 'Bully’s Mom'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Absolute Foolishness, even for a fiction!

01Timber6701Timber67over 1 year ago

It was ok ,,, but it’s to far fetched,, the big turn off for me was the golden shower stuff and her being almost like her son to bully the one she is suppose to love ,,, sad

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Just plain dumb.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I can't say I hate it, that's reserved for other stories, but the story was too short for such a big concept. The speed makes the emotional flips of all the characters feel unrealistic, and the father being a priest and all is just too 'perfect' without more foreshadowing.

slimvslimvover 1 year ago

I am in awe of this story! It is more than wonderful. I loved everything about it. Jared and Lisa are perfect for each other. Every story element worked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Got lame at the end more sex needed

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

If Lisa hasn't had her change of life, maybe Jared will put love pee in her and make her a mommy. Really a wonderful story, as Lisa took a cast-off, made him a man,then her husband. She needs to be a mommy again...

juanjsojrjuanjsojrabout 1 year ago

Too bad she’s too old to have a child for him I love this story

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

The bully’s mother seduced him, had sex with him, urinated on him, and in the end married him. I am surprised the author did not take the spin-off and have her pimp him out to other women.

MfkndragonMfkndragon10 months ago

You lost me when she pissed in his mouth I mean seriously wtf that kid is sick as hell

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I.M.O. There is not enough character development nor enough story development to make it believeable. I know it is fiction but if you want me to invest in the story and behavior, you must show how the characters got to where they wound up and I don't.

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