by Dash91830
It was ok ,,, but it’s to far fetched,, the big turn off for me was the golden shower stuff and her being almost like her son to bully the one she is suppose to love ,,, sad
I can't say I hate it, that's reserved for other stories, but the story was too short for such a big concept. The speed makes the emotional flips of all the characters feel unrealistic, and the father being a priest and all is just too 'perfect' without more foreshadowing.
I am in awe of this story! It is more than wonderful. I loved everything about it. Jared and Lisa are perfect for each other. Every story element worked.
If Lisa hasn't had her change of life, maybe Jared will put love pee in her and make her a mommy. Really a wonderful story, as Lisa took a cast-off, made him a man,then her husband. She needs to be a mommy again...
The bully’s mother seduced him, had sex with him, urinated on him, and in the end married him. I am surprised the author did not take the spin-off and have her pimp him out to other women.
You lost me when she pissed in his mouth I mean seriously wtf that kid is sick as hell
I.M.O. There is not enough character development nor enough story development to make it believeable. I know it is fiction but if you want me to invest in the story and behavior, you must show how the characters got to where they wound up and I don't.