All Comments on 'Bumping into the Babysitter'

Keep this one going. Please.

Excellent follow up.

Now that is most excellent.

Only spotted one pickup, in the eighth from last para:

'working out when we could fuck her again'

You probably meant either 'working out when I could fuck her again' or 'working out when we could fuck again'; I would prefer the former as more active voice, but your Chris seems more a man who lets things happen to him than who makes things happen.

"his is a direct follow-up to Interrupting the babysitter."

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So, why wait until the story is open to provide that information, especially when it would have made a much better synopsis.

I feel like it jumped a lot from the first story, where Chris was so adamant that Annie not touch him & he not touch her. Maybe it was the alcohol. I guess I thought it would be more like the author's "Bad Idea" series, where the man & woman inched closer & closer to fucking with each story. Things went further each time. With this story, it seems like there's nowhere else to go. Annie was so quiet & shy & kind of nerdy in the first story, in this one she was so pushy. A man 15-20yrs older than you, married with kids pushes you away, says no repeatedly, & flat out runs from you, let it go for God's sake! He's trying not to completely ruin his life! Just my opinion.....

Hot, so very Hot!

Oh yea. Really enjoyed.

You just know it is all going to end in a total shitshow but the journey is so incredibly hot.

All fun & games till you're in a tiny apartment, paying child support out the ass & seeing your kids every 1st & 3rd weekend.