by Sakkijarven
Great story
Love the theme
Hope you do more home invasion stories involving other families
Great, would love to see Charlotte have Dad’s baby and pass it off as sibling.
I gave it a 5 rating because of the somewhat forced incest and non-consent. I would have liked to have heard more about how "HAIRY" the pussies were! Since this was an unplanned encounter, the ladies would most likely have not been shaved or trimmed either. Meaning they were actually normal looking and attractive. This is a good story, please continue and describe pussy hair in your stories --- even if it's trimmed???, because when you don't, readers are left to think about disgusting razor burn, infected pubic hairs and stubble from a day old shave producing a moderately unattractive mound.
It sucks when there are inconsistencies all over the place. Who has a windowless living room? Why would he tie them up and immediately untie them only to them being suddenly tied up again in two paragraphs AND actually getting tied up again in another one? How could he forget his mask? How can the burglar push their heads, hold a gun and record on phone all at once?
Also the ending was fucking dumb. I know it's a fantasy but even fantasy should have a semblance of something that could happen, albeit improbable. This is just random stuff put together without any solid reason.