All Comments on 'Burglar Forces Family to Fuck'

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gorden55gorden55about 2 years ago

I really liked this story please keep your stories coming. Thankyou.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

How much did dad have to pay his buddy to "break in"? ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story

Love the theme

Hope you do more home invasion stories involving other families

jackheadjackheadabout 2 years ago

Well I guess the title says it all! Not sure what to say about this?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Write More.

Would love to read how their lives turn out after this....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Part 2 please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hot story love to see this in a porno with a real family

GingerleyGingerleyalmost 2 years ago

Great, would love to see Charlotte have Dad’s baby and pass it off as sibling.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I played with my WET pussy from start to finish. Hot story!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I gave it a 5 rating because of the somewhat forced incest and non-consent. I would have liked to have heard more about how "HAIRY" the pussies were! Since this was an unplanned encounter, the ladies would most likely have not been shaved or trimmed either. Meaning they were actually normal looking and attractive. This is a good story, please continue and describe pussy hair in your stories --- even if it's trimmed???, because when you don't, readers are left to think about disgusting razor burn, infected pubic hairs and stubble from a day old shave producing a moderately unattractive mound.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

It sucks when there are inconsistencies all over the place. Who has a windowless living room? Why would he tie them up and immediately untie them only to them being suddenly tied up again in two paragraphs AND actually getting tied up again in another one? How could he forget his mask? How can the burglar push their heads, hold a gun and record on phone all at once?

Also the ending was fucking dumb. I know it's a fantasy but even fantasy should have a semblance of something that could happen, albeit improbable. This is just random stuff put together without any solid reason.

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