All Comments on 'Burned Ch. 16'

I was enjoying the story until bondage came into it. I lost interest after that. I started reading on the belief that it was Strictly an incest story.

Not for me any more.

You've changed the plot completely and it's just not working.

Too many things wrong IMHO

First gone from incest love to perverted freak fuckfest, then what's the point of safe words if they are not used, Chris from the beginning was not Bi or into Male on male of any kind now this?!? Totally lost the original plot, I understand it's the authors story but when you have such a major and unexpected shift in plot, expect to lose readers.

Hmm admittedly I've been skimming and skipping as storyline went off course, badly.