All Comments on 'Burning Bird Ch. 01: The Bomb'

why the hell was this even written?

@Anonymous lol dude relax im just setting up a larger story arc before getting into the sex. if you just wanna get your rocks off check out Room Serviced part 4, 7, 9, or 10 or read someone else's work lol

the writing quality is actually great. the emotions are well conveyed and the little description parts help a lot in imagining the stakes that are at play here

Five Stars and Following…just in case this talented writer picks this story back up