All Comments on 'Burning Embers Ch. 02'

You keep hitting on fantasies of mine! Keep it up please. 5 stars.

I cant wait for more. Loved your writing from start to finish. I would like to see the continuation of different fantasies played out between her and the demon

Thank you! Chapter 3 is pending (day 2 so might still be a few more days) and I forgot to load up chapter 4 and 5 to drafts before leaving town but they are ready to go after another round of edits.

Wow so freaking hot. The only thing I would change is it goes from non-consensual to consensual a bit too fast. I prefer more of a slow burn myself but to each their own. I really hope you will write something very similar or maybe continue this one but I wouldn't mind seeing her resist a little bit more before she gives in ;)