All Comments on 'Burning Passion'

Love this one. He took that son of a bitch’s soul, and his wife knows it. Kiwihunter have you considered therapy for being a simpering little sissy who obviously hates men? Try it soon.

4 stars

Waste of time reading. Written well but the concept unbelievable. I don’t understand why writers continually show women crapping all over men and then the men take the women back. No self respecting man would have ever taken her back. LM

She would need to endure a backhand from me, to take her back. A physical strike that leaves a mark all her friends can see. Then I would accept this whore back. Marked as mine by bruise and hand

I'll reiterate what I've written in many other comments: "It is impossible to reconcile from a prolonged affair." Oh, you might stay married, but that's just staying together for convenience, comfort, and financial reasons. Possibly some form of love, but the binding love that was there before is forever fractured and contaminated, never ever to be restored.

5* Well, I think this was pretty impressive . . . revenge and reconciliation. I don't see a wimp husband here. Thank you for posting it.

I liked the writing but I have to agree with the other commentators, whimp husband.

5 ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Love the BWCA!

They say U will never find a body in the BWCA…

Plz write More….

Dear wife may have cuckolded him but in the end her literally burned her bridges to the ground. Fair is fair.

DIVORCE!!!!! He was a giant cuckold.

cuck

What a bunch of horseshit. More promotion of the stupid idea that women can use an affair to make their lives better and be better people, and that husbands should just quietly accept that they're whores. More to the point of COURSE the sex life dries up and gets tired and boring if she WON'T COMMUNICATE HER NEEDS, AND on top of that, denies all sorts of things to her husband and has limits and only goes hog wild with her lover! It's that sort of stupid fucking attitude that ruins things!

You made every excuse for her to be a dumb whore, and rewarded her for it with success and a devoted cuck slave husband.

A better ending would have been if he'd taken her to the cabin and tied her and her lover to the burning pyre, but that's not realistic. A divorce where he took all the fruits of her success would have been better, since she was angry and remorseless with him and was only upset that she was found out.

Thanks I enjoyed this!

Another bad story about a cucky and a slut

The nasty slut fucked her big dick boyfriend for a year and got completely away with it. The weak ass pussy husband is just plain pathetic. One star

You have to wonder how many times one has to use the phrase "same old, same old" here. Self entitled slutwife, stupid/weak husband, no atonement or comeuppance in the bitch's behavior.

Lame....

I gave the story a "5"

In a perverse way I enjoyed some of the most recent comments almost as much as the stories - that's the only reason I ever read Loving Wives: the readers moved to comment as if the story were an advice column and thereby reveal more about themselves than they would face to face if sober

Forgiveness is a great thing in real life; if reading and commenting on BTB in Literotica gets it out of one's system, fine. I fear that much of the vitriol represents frustration and disappointment with the way American society has developed from the imaginary Golden Age of the 50s when white men all had good jobs and the wives stayed at home and behaved even when hubby didn't

BlackRandi had a post today (12/28/2022) that develops this point much better than I can

"Oh, it gets better Jan. Then the guys burned the place and everything in it…"

"NO!"

- I can't help but wonder if she was sounding upset with that NO because she's like "poor Jake, his beautiful book gone"...?

Jake should consider himself lucky to have ended the night still connected to his dick.

Ya think?

Spoilt by lack of editing, misspelling, missing words etc.

What a terrible wife. The affair was not forgiveable. Even after 20 years The husband supported her going to Iowa and the master class. She then fucked big dick Jake (and yes 12 inch cocks are unbelievably rare and a stupid LW trope, not needed for this story) almost every weekday for the better part of a year because she was self centered, depressed, and lonely. She was a real narcissistic slut. And worse she kept the letters so thr husband saw everything through Jake's eyes and mind. This would be beyond devastating. If a husband found out about an affair 20 years ago, normally a wife could softening or marginalize the aspects of her betrayal. But here that was impossible and since told from Jake's perspective was probably even worse because he would exaggerate or assume things about their extramarital affair that probably weren't even true regarding her feelings or thoughts of her husband. And yeah when they have the argument there is her bullsshit response about how she was lonely and somehow seeing him every weekend was not enough. Huh? So that drives her to fuck young Jake hundred of times over the year. And the climax of their argument is her mad he had a single one time revenge fuck? This author writes interesting plots but the reconciliations are not believable because either they just happen with little to no struggle or closure or teh betrayal is so monumental. Divorce the bitch. Move on. This should have been a btb on Jake but also a divorce for the wife. No need to humiliate her. Just leave her. Thr kids are in their 30s and have their own families. Again her affair worth way beyond the pale. Uggh.

Nearly a 5 star. almost right up there for a 5 because hub got real solid revenge on the asshole who used his wife for sex, but didn't make the 5 because as usual in so many of these stories the wife was allowed to trot out the "lonely woman with deep needs" excuse and that was more or less that as far as her contrition went.

She abused the freedom her husband had given her to develop her writing career for a full year. Then at the end of that year we see just how low she had allowed her cheating to take her.. All the excuses in the world don't wash for a woman who turns up for the prestigious event that is her graduation where her husband will be present and she is leaking her young stud's cum from her ass and pussy. What a standard for a wife and mother to set. What a risk to take if she'd been discovered in that state.

Solid 5. Screw the whiners who want to call Matt a Cuck. Life gets nasty, really nasty, so you give her credit for never having screwed around before Jerk, I mean Jake, and never having screwed around since, jerk, I mean, oh fuck no I don't mean jake, I mean road kill. Burn his shit to the ground, fuck her senseless ANY TIME YOU WANT, and she now knows better than to do it again, or it could be HER SHIT that disappears in a cloud of dust and a hearty, FUCK YOU BITCH.

He should have dumped her as soon as he found out.

@lujon2019. Have you had any therapy for the anger you are carrying with regard to your wife's infidelity. It's quite apparent that it's still bothering you greatly I suggest you get some help and then you will be able to go on leading a productive, fulfilling life. You may even be able to convince your ex to reconcile

Jan stared at her cuck. She watched as he turned toward her fixing his gaze on hers.

His eyes were ablaze with a burning shame for being a spine cum sucking peice of cuck shit.

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fixed it for you

@iammweasel - always the ultra critic but without any written examples to prove what an incredible writing authority he/she/it claims to be. "Show us how it's done," vol. MMMDCCXLVII!

Jake had a huge ego, so in destroying the "things" in his life - especially his only-one-copy manuscript - Matt effectively destroyed his life. Only a Dig Ol' Bick, and nothing else. Look up "poetic justice" in the dictionary... Solid 5!

One revenge fuck does not cover a years worth of fighting. She never had guilt, and was never really sorry. She is the star writer!!! REAL MEN DUMP CHEATING SKANKS!!!!

A year of screwing around and no revenge by the husband - you are out of your mind , every man with a backbone would be gone!!!! What a wimpy cuck!!!

Total BS!!!

Great ending!

A definite 5.

Bill S.

Obviously you aimed for the more fragile male readers among us, didnt you!

A you made the bitch a cuck (which explains imhapless and his applauding a cuck and his crappy writing too) and you got who needed to have their ass handed to them (metaphorically) it was the wife. Fragile males always wanna be Alpha dipshits (just read their chest puffing idiocy when they comment) all aim for the pricks who didnt take vows with them and the men are such pussies they dont dare toss the bitch to the curb.

Again aiming for the bottom feeders will never make a good story.

also should have crushed his balls and left him there

Umm.... Where's the rest of the story? It was great so far, but the real reconciliation would have been for her to confront him about his trip, and inquire about fire pit in his belly after the other fire went out. 4 stars for a great story, but without a proper ending.

'Wildbill

Please! Please! Please! Learn the difference between the words "Then" and "Than".

5* but the wrong person was punished. Wife, Jan was the cheater not Jake. She should have been the one punished.

Why take back a hoe after only one revenge session

Justice was served (almost).

Should have cut Jakes dick off!!! Damned RAAC is bullshit...

1 star for a partial story, because it will drag down your average score.

RAAC is not possible nor acceptable when there is a planned and repeated infidelity.

The wife cheated for a whole year and compounded her infidelity by keeping her lover's letters for more than 20 years. She deserved to lose everything, as well as the public humiliation of being exposed as a cheating, skanky, slut, bitch. She needed to be kicked to the curb. Sorry - no points for this story.

She needs to pay

So fucking gay.

OH HELL YES!

Excellent story. I think it deserves finishing

Entertaining; need I say more? 5*

The last line was perfect. Well done.

Good one. Great revenge - a sweet dish best served cold. And in this case many years later - when it hurt the asswipe the most.

"The new Matt was confident, assertive and incredibly sexy."

no he was a cuck

Cucks get one star

well done my good man, well done.

None of the issues brought up was addressed in any way.

And I liked it even more. The husband and brother balance the scales and she recovers what she nearly threw away. I like that and it was well told.

But the asshole, Jake, knew she was a married woman and seduced her anyway. I like to think that if he hadn't had the other woman there, he would have been part of the ashes too. As it was they took his soul and Jan's too. Great story.

so how did the husband know about jakes secret hideaway cabin in the woods where the guy who taught an intro to English community collage class kept millions in art and first editions and the one and only copy of a million dollar manuscript at the center of a bidding war that he for some unknown reason waited 20 years to show anyone?

another pathetic cuck who lets the slut get away with it. HE paid her way, took care of the children and everything else, and she sluts. Exposure and divorce is the ONLY way any sane man would deal with her.

"I have done everything in my power to make amends. "

Really, like what exactly???? Been faithful'? That's not making amends that was expected from you to begin with but you cheated and spent a whole year fucking a younger stud. All the while your faithful husband took care of your family while you were off discovering yourself and becoming a writer and your dear hubby funded your whole sordid selfish affair...the writing and the fucking. Did you feel regret or think about confessing and begging forgiveness? No you kept and carried around all those previous love letters from your former lover as a memento. In making amends, did you offer your faithful hubby a guilt free pass to fuck anyone and everyone he wanted for a whole year. Hell, you're a successful and famous author now and could afford to rent high priced escorts to pleasure your husband continuously and show him how much you really loved him and really make it up to him.

Not only are your a cheating cunt you're a cheap ass'd one as well. He should have divorced your ass and made you pay alimony for the rest of his life. You got off easy free and never paid a price for your betrayal.

It leaves a lot unsaid. Not clear to me why the marriage was restored so happily. Guess I have to imagine how.

Interesting twists and turns. Serious editing needs to be done on this piece.

Revenge was completely crazy. Wife was the guilty party and evidently got off scot free. Makes no sense.

Wifey had lover's cum dripping down down her legs when she welcomed her husband and children. The self-centered bitch got off too damn easy.

The wrong person was punished in this story. The wife was the cheater not Jake. Wife gets off scott free after spending a year living, having sex with and giving the lover things she didn't do for husband. So because the wife couldn't keep from cheating on her husband, Jake, who was single and merely partook of what was freely given loses everything and the cheater gets to live her happy life and feels good about it.

anon.1

The wrong person was punished in this story. The wife was the cheater not Jake. Wife gets off scott free after spending a year living, having sex with and giving the lover things she didn't do for husband. So because the wife couldn't keep from cheating on her husband, Jake, who was single and merely partook of what was freely given loses everything and the cheater gets to live her happy life and feels good about it.

anon.1

He reclaims his wife and takes his revenge on the other guy but taking his prize possession. Pay back can be a bitch.

what good is revenge against the man your wife wanted as a lover more than you if you keep the cheating whore?

Perfect, absolutely perfect revenge. Jake fucked his ife, he fucked Jake's life. Never read a better burn of a bastard lover.

I've known the type. They think their artistic side is fed by their passions and their passions are not ruled by their commitments. She doesn't deserve him, but she can try to.

Seriously? Why is the husband still with her? She spent a year with another guy, doing things with him she wouldn’t do with her spouse. And they are still married!

Well written, beautifully told and very satisfying as well.

Just cut enough to damage badly without cutting off

Butterfly dick and leave balls hanging out of sac

Her?

Still cogitating to

if you are a spineless cuck and keep the whore?

To have the husband find out about his wife the whore twenty years later, is as bad as having him find out after she’s dead. Extremely cowardly.

He got his revenge on Jake but kept the slut. He should have divorced her long ago no trust, no respect means no marriage.

Matt hurt Jake in the best possible way. Took his life's work and his heart. Good punishment for a soulless pedator. Jan knows now that Matt isn't a doormat and that the same eastbound be hers. Jake is free to write again, if he stops running.

wrong person punished here. A year of cheating, practically living with her boyfriend. Having sex the day your husband and children come to your graduation so they cannot even go to your ap't that your husband paid for. Using your affair as the plotline of all your stories. The list of wife's abuses goes on and on but she gets off scot free and her sex partner who owed the husband no duty of loyalty is the one that gets his life destroyed. Still gave it a 5 for the emotions it aroused and quality writing.

anon.1

the wife was the cheater not Jake. Jake is ruined but wife has no repercussions for a year's worth of cheating and letting someone have her in ways that she never let her husband. Not really fair.

anon.1

It ends perfectly. She at last understands just what her husband is capable of doing. He got revenge in a most extreme way. Jake will likely never try to write again, especially about their affair. She will probably never even have a thought about having any kind of relationship with another man. There is a bunch more we can read into that last line. For me, an unenlightened LW reader, it was perfect. Thanks juanwildone for a good story.

Story just stopped after she was told what happened. and looked at her husband. There should have been more in what was written and there should have been at least another chapter

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Would have been to take his wife up to the assholes cabin, tie them both to the bed and then burn the place down. She had to be one of the biggest sluts here. No bullshit reconciliation here.

Now that she knows hubby should drop hints.

Say things like "Jacob really got you hot. I should try to make you hot"

Start playing with cigarette lighters. Build and outdoor firepit.

Start smoking meats. Always saying how much fun a good fire is.

Then when bored with the psychological warefare just kill her.

Otherwise this is just cuck shit.

The husband's side...how she was frigid with him during their entire marriage. No doubt he had over the years been often rejected when he tried to give her ''a good seeing to''

Suprises me you end sentence with preposition.

More to the point for twenty years she kept husband locked out of her writing cabin. Each of her 17 novels and much of her poetry and journal an homage to her affair and her predatory stud.

Oh then she is furious he has a fling

By her own admission she was bored with sex life years before screwing lothario. She was tired of her family and husband and obviously made her displeasure so evident that they acquiesed to her desire to live away from them for a year. Husband did have sex with her but she found it lacking.

She noted how well run the home was as if her being away had no effect. That means she had long ago distanced herself from them.

She would have had affair whether she went to school or not

Naah.

Talent for writing, yup.

Ability to write satisfying plot, nope.

She didn't cheat for a year. She never stopped and I don't see it happening. She demonstrated it with the strange concern she had for his burnination.

The whole burnination subplot is incorrect. He waved the diploma in his face like the other guy went there to stalk and seduce his wife. He went there because his writing sucked.

The story felt good at first, then after a little consideration, I have to say it's all incorrect. She never stopped cheating. Her husband thinks waving a diploma in someone's face seals a revenge. He took her back and she's still cheating, and will be until the day she destroys the letters and lets fucking go.

If he's going to pull a RAAC, he should at least have killed the other dude, burned the letters, melted the typewriter, and turned a sharpened striker into a shiv, burned the apartment down, and maybe saved Hitler from the Russians. Then his revenge would have been as dumb as his reconciliation.

Not to excuse her, but she was away for WEEKS, comes home hot to trot, and her husband seems disinterested? If he had given her a "good seeing to" she wouldn't have been easy pickings for Jake.

Not to say that she wouldn't have fallen for him anyway, he was apparently an old hand at his game!

Cunt has the nerve to yellat husband when he outs her affair.

If he hung around it should only be to plot her painful demise.

Jacob the eunich while tied to the tree.

Then sidle up to wife and say "you are next"

But to take her back with her aggrieved non apologetic attitude as if she were the victim.

Nope. Not gonna happen.

No reason given for why "his eyes were ablaze with a burning passion".

Nuff said!

the pain might never fade, but they are still alive, TK U MLJ LV NV

Terrible reconciliation story that made me angry. The wife cheated on her husband for a WHOLE YEAR (even on her graduation day, when her entire family was coming to the ceremony), and then she gets mad when the husband has sex with someone else one time? Ridiculous. What's worse is that she is not even sorry for her adultery, and keeps the letters from her lover. He husband should have kicked her to the curb.

One of the best I have ever read!!!!

Gonna have to bookmark this one !!!!!

Well done. Story pacing and construct were top notch. Would love for you to begin posting here again.

pathetic cuck shit.

And hers was typical female blather and rationalization for being a slut on a players list

Her family and husband sacrifice for her to ''answer the call''and she fucks guy before graduation and stands with family for photos with that guy's cum running down leg

Yep she was a prize...funny you did not mention her typical female sluttiness

Typical macho ending nothing in reality.

She'd better learn to keep her legs together, unless she wants to become a human fireball that is. Not my idea of a cookout, but hey it's her funeral.

A guy at my workplace who was in his mid forties with two teenage kids agreed to fund his wife to get a law degree at university which was a three hour away drive. She lived at the student residences. Well when she got her degree, she sent her husband divorce papers. It turns out that she met a forty year old man in her class and they started having an affair with in two weeks of the course starting. Married women can be real sluts when they are allowed off their leashes!

Husband and sons travel to her graduation but she has nothing to do with them screwing lover all night and in morning not even cleaning up for ceremony.

Only reason she saw light was course was finished. And how stupid of her to think she was stud's only slut.

Flaw in story is jackass was screwing every night and all weekend and spending time chronicling sex so when did he find time to do course work

Well written just because of emotions of disgust engendered

Agree with that commenter almost entirely.

No way a sane husband allows wife to go away to college for year.

Certainly there were colleges nearby where she could be home nightly and learn to write-if not correspondence-online courses.

For 20 years she has relived that year in every book she wrote. Her claim to have saved those letters as reminder of what she almost lost is ludicrous

He gets full year with Diane next door and hopefully she also can write

THE SLUT WIFE ENGAGED IN A 21 YEAR LONG AFFAIR. SHE CHEATED ON HER LOVING HUSBAND EVERY TIME SHE LOOKED AT THOSE LETTERS OR REMINDED HER SELF OF THE YEAR OF THE BEST SEX. WHAT AN ARROGANT CHEATER. THE AUTHOR DOES NOT BRING HER TO JUSTICE. NO SERIOUS GRIEVING ON HER PART FOR THE HURT SHE CAUSED. A TYPICAL CUCK STORY WITH NO CONSEQUENCES FORTHE PERP. .

So he finds out that she cheated for A YEAR, they fight and SHE gets pissed and try to slap him?!?!?

And when they "reconcile" for no good reason the dumb bastard is "apologetic, conciliatory and willing to try and preserve their marriage" after she had cheated for A YEAR?!?!?

Grow a spine, for fuck's sake!

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It's worse. Every minute after the first time she fucked that dude was stolen. Stolen time, effort, love, money, affection. The second you do something your spouse would leave you for, and lie about it, you go from being a spouse to a con artist. Pretending to be someone you're not to steal something that isn't yours (anymore). This character stole twenty years from her husband on top of the fucked up affair.