All Comments on 'Bursting In'

by theWriterInTheNude

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Nicole2023Nicole20232 months ago

Cute story, I enjoyed it. Thank you

UncertainTUncertainT2 months ago

I really enjoyed your story. I particularly enjoyed the limited number of characters in a limited environment, it allowed some taut interactions and dialogue. 5*.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

More, please?! Delicious!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Would have given you five stars if you had left all of the religious stuff out.

AnonymousAnonymous24 days ago

Arg. Cliff hanger. Need more

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I work as a computer programmer in my everyday life. Writing has always been a creative outlet that I don't always get. Erotic fiction is an exciting new thing. Writing in the nude is not new.