All Comments on 'Bus Shelter'

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pentheswordpentheswordalmost 11 years ago
Well done

Really liked the story. Heavy and hot, but just a touch sweet

dilettantish_reflibrariandilettantish_reflibrarianalmost 11 years ago
Wow, I'd forgotten what it was like. . . .

This story (except for some of the word choices) rang true for me. It really captures the gritty reality of what it's like to be young, horny, and and without a car. Great details gave the story immediacy.

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 11 years ago
Well-written

A lovely anonymous encounter. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I liked it. Could have used a bit more description with it tho.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Total Crap

Never read such rubbish

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