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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Shitty ending ngl, ruined it for me

gravitrongravitronabout 3 years ago

Fantastic up until the ending. I'd recommend just discarding that ending and continuing ramping up the story, and ramping up the depravity until Annie can't handle it any longer and has to confront his blackmailer. That, or just have him not send the photos and have him just be happy with his wife.

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