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by Gothchick1982

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lordchilworthlordchilworthover 15 years ago
nice first try

good tale...well told... readability could have been improved by a little better editing... nor criticism, just advice... mainly though,,, thank you ... more, more,more

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 15 years ago
Wonderful

A very hot and sexy story. I really loved these types of stories. You could have extended the sex scenes but overall great.

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