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by Gothchick1982

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PrincessErinPrincessErinover 15 years ago
Wonderful

A very hot and sexy story. I really loved these types of stories. You could have extended the sex scenes but overall great.

lordchilworthlordchilworthover 15 years ago
nice first try

good tale...well told... readability could have been improved by a little better editing... nor criticism, just advice... mainly though,,, thank you ... more, more,more

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