All Comments on 'Business Travellers Meet'

The sexy dialogue was A++.

I love this story and hope it's the start of a longer arc, whether it continues to be about Zach and Cathy, or Zach meeting other people during his travels.

Keep it up, my friend!

Looking at the posting date I.am disappointed that the possibility of continuation of this story is extremely remote. Obviously, I enjoyed the story. The tension between the two characters was almost tangible, palpable.

A few minor editorial glitches caught my attention but in no way detracted from the exquisite story unfolding as I eagerly read the words you conveying it to me.

Well done. I do greatly wish you will again return and shared more if your stories.

Thank you for your comment.

Well written, interesting storyline and very erotic. I am glad to have read this story and would certainly love to read a Part 2, and 3, and ....

This was very entertaining.. the whole money exchange was something I wasn't expecting. All that cool talk to end with money swapping seemed off, and it made me wonder if the whole thing wasn't prearranged. Were they married to each other after all?

@BgDaddy, really not, other than the meeting, flirting and some heavy petting, the rest was fabricated. ;)