All Comments on 'Business Trip'

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Reggie2xxReggie2xxalmost 4 years ago

I really liked it I thought it was a sexy story. I usually do like yours

GybbsGybbsalmost 4 years ago
Nelson's my hero!

I'd love to do this to our office CJ - except we don't have one. My loss! This story was a HOOT!

louiseacdlouiseacdalmost 4 years ago
whew

well that was fucking hot

Bi47Bi47almost 4 years ago

OMG I hope there a chapter two.😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈

lonelyheartVAlonelyheartVAalmost 4 years ago
That was the bomb!

Good read!

CorjixCorjixalmost 4 years ago
You Never Know

If I only had Nelson's courage at those times when there were hot men among my casual friends...Instead of feeling inferior, I might have chosen to pursue them. Even though I am not blessed with Nelson's endowment, at least one of those hot guys might have given me a shot. Nothing ventured - nothing gained. I'll remember that going forward. Looking forward to more about Nelson and CJ!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hot

There is something so sexy about a smaller guy being dominant over a bigger one, because size doesn't determine who is more dominant, except in porn or these stories. Sometimes small guys are very turned on by dominating bigger guys or younger dominating older or poor dominating richer. The reversal of the power dynamic can very powerful for both, its only a question of who enjoys which roles more. We need more stories with these themes.

CuriousPeteCuriousPetealmost 4 years ago

Great story! Very hot. Nice to see the bully get his due.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Sexy dose of justice

While I'm not a fan of dominance/submission themes I did enjoy the deliciously sexy way the little big man came out on top! Just desserts for CJ.

dodgeboy2dodgeboy2over 3 years ago
Very very hot

Wow this story was extremely hot, CJ got what he deserved and Nelson got what he wanted. I daydreamed thinking of Nelson's cock filling his throat, thinking of CJ's throat finally giving in taking every inch inside. I could also imagine Nelson's massive cock inside him & almost feel the initial pain he must have felt.

I hope someday you decide write a second chapter, I would love to see Nelson introduce CJ to some of his friends, maybe gang banging CJ. Keep up the writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

loved the story, but Nelson didn't give CJ a blow job or make sure that there was no doubt that he would love to do this again.

nawty2nawty2over 2 years ago

Loved this story. Pity there wasn't a next chapter. First story I read of yours and I loved it. Going to read more of your work. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

hot. love a good story where a big stud gets taken down and turned into a slutty pussy bitch by a smaller guy. hope there will be more to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Amazing. It's hard to find a good story with a smaller dom top and a hot bigger muscle bottom bitch. Nelson should makd CJ wear slutty lace panties all the time (to work, at the gym, when he gets fucked) like a good little bitch. Put him in a cock-cage and only let him cum when he's sucking dick or getting his pussy fucked.

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