All Comments on 'Business Trip Pt. 01'

Where was the romance? This is an extra-martial affair. Aside from the content the writing was in need of editing, both spelling and punctuation. Sorry, really didn't work for me. Maybe in Loving Wives it would have been better received.

What is this cheating story doing in Romance? Where is the romantic tension?

And the use of texting shorthand was terrible, u; ur; come on learn how to write

Should be in Erotic Couplings or Loving Wives not Romance, imo.

Get an editor.

The romance category was poorly chosen for this submission, as there was clearly no romantic involvement or building of a relationship. Romance is not the right category for this submission and I am disappointed in finding this story in the Romance category.

Aside from that, your story is in need of editing. Texting shorthand is not appropriate for these stories and shows either inexperience or laziness of the writer.