All Comments on 'But How Do You Know? Ch. 02'

Very enjoyable story - and very well-written like all your stuff. Thank you.

If you asked why I write things for Literotica, I couldn't really tell you, but it is nice to hear other people enjoy reading them.

quite different than most stories on this site. keep it going.

Just loved it - even better than Chapter 1 which was also worthy of 5/5. The loving between Paige and Charlie and how Paige orchestrated everything was just amazing. It was hot and wet and felt real. Interesting characterizations. Gifted visualization skills. I loved his respect for Paige and Charlie's love and marriage. All of it was so beautiful. And yes, i'm quite wet!

xoxo,

Di

Very well-written story. I'm hoping that you continue the story. Beyond the transactional part of their relatonship--which is pretty damn sexy, all the parties seem genuinely to care about each other. I hope you'll explore that going forward. I hope he'll be involved with them through the pregnancy and beyond. Thanks, General, for your contribution..

Oldmoose

No eyelashes?

Sorry. Had to say it.

4:5 anyway nice story

Touché!

I hadn’t considered that one.

I've really enjoyed both chapters of this story. Do you have any plans for a third?

Thank you all for your thoughts. I see several people asking about sequels but I’m afraid I don’t have any solid ideas for the future of this threesome. Work, as always, takes up so much time and there are other things I hope to write when I get a chance.

But, seeing as so many of us are locked down right now, anyone else could take on the story and write the next chapter, even if you consider yourself a ‘reader’ not a writer’. Just pick up the characters and the backstory and run with it. I look forward to hearing what Paige and Charlie do next.

G_P

Super hot and sexy story! Well written, great characters who really seem to care for each other. I'd love to read a new chapter, just like many of you.

Great story. I especially like the slow coming around.

gee, it's so wholesome imma throw up. he shoulda just turn them both straight