All Comments on 'But I'm Innocent'

Boo fucking hoo.

The fact that you made his previously rational wife a fucking sociopath and then turned her into a retard made me shake my head. You could have explored it but no! You went full retard.

What a bell ringer of a story! Nasty nasty nasty.

It had me going. I thought maybe the darkest ending would have him castrated.

But in any case it was entertaining and I had to finish it.

Well done!

R.

..just a wild ride -like three hills of a roller coaster with each one scarier then the previous hill

easy 5*

Pile of Shit; eat it and die

A better end would be that George learns the truth then throws his wife out refusing to give her. Blake is the baby’s father but Lacie gets two years in prison. Blake gets custody but his new job is 2000 miles away. When Lacie is released she can visit her baby but her parole says she can’t leave the state so she won’t see her daughter for at least five years. Then she would have to leave her mother, father and Brenda to see her daughter. She moves in with Brenda but finds that Brenda has a new lover who doesn’t lie Lacie. Lacie finds herself forc,ed out and living looks and smile and knows she will spend the rest of her life alone.

Three supposed endings but the never end. They stop half way. Is the kid his, does he take custody, does his wife end up with Brenda, does his wife in ending three spend longer in jail? What happened to the two rapists? It goes on and on with no resolution. what about his mother? 1* sorry not impressed.

Why is this 'writer' so obsessed with rape and he NEVER, NEVER ends a story.

You mean, beyond the obvious, that's he's seriously clinically mentally ill?

Ugh no real ending

Why do men put more importance on a man being raped than a woman being raped? I like stories where a man is forcibly raped, or gang-raped. Men cringe at the descriptive narrative. Welcome to our world, men. I particularly enjoyed the description of the narrator telling of his constant 24/7 fear of Ernest, Randy, Brenda, Maggie, Angel and Lacie. I, for one, would never trust a court, especially a divorce court. Concerning the writing...the narrator's name is not given anywhere on the final page throughout that entire conversation with George. Try having a lengthy conversation with someone without calling them by name. It is next to impossible. Writers who fail to mention the narrator by name on the last page will always get a failing grade from me.

No long term epilogue what the hell happened?

I feel dirty, like I feel when I read one of Edrider's crappy stories. And this is the same type of ending - unfinished. Whose baby is it? Does George ask the right questions and what happens to him? Does Lacie pursue him? Too many unanswered questions even with three separate endings.

1 star

Cause after all that effort they all three sucked

To folks that leave "anonymous" comments, this story needs to be completed. 3-stars, sorry but you have to finish it.

Couldn't finish it. Nauseating.

I can see the argument now,

Your honor, surely two generations of incestuous rape is enough? The mother and her long term lover both admit to engaging in sadistic "seductions" of new lovers and family members, how long until this child is raped, excuse me, inducted into a sexual relationship by her mother or grandmother?

Might be good to know.

the husband is panty waste. The guy is more of a pussy than Matt Monroe males. You get raped, nuts almost cut off, almost served hands and you only get a gun because of the second beating. Most people would get a gun once they knew the where being followed. Hell, haven't you seen "Snapped". Women that felt threatened start planning his demise, this dumb ass waited till he was ass fucked and got his ass beat. Ernie and Randy would have already been dead with just about any man on the planet.

whats with all the different endings

I have liked for one of the endings to have been a recocilliation.

Finished the first ending. Endings two and three must be some really sick shit. Thanks for the warning.

Saw this coming early on page one but...this IS literotica. I wonder if I would have figured it out at that age.

"Third ending was definitely the hottest

I have liked for one of the endings to have been a recocilliation."

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Reconciliation? How does that work? I can't see that happening unless he is under mind control or is a slave. No self respecting man could reconcile after what she has done...smh

ow can any court demand counselling when th ewife has committed crimes against the husband??

Isn't love Grand in Arkansas?

Good story too bad you haven't been waiting lately tho.

One more chapter about George's wife and daughter, gawd, would like to read him growing some balls and kick them out.

Be something to learn about the baby too.

This is it? Needs at least an epilogue.

you are one sick puppy lol

There would have been cameras in the Condo elevator, lobby and entrance doors!

Anonymous4 months ago

Bullshit!

There would have been cameras in the Condo elevator, lobby and entrance doors!

that was addressed, they were seen, and charges were filed

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the only thing I dont like about this story, is in all three endings he never tries for custody, she had been in a long term incestious realsionship with her mother, it is on that video, in all three endings but th elast Brenda admits she hopes the baby is a girl and metions plans to pull her into an incestious relationship as well

Why is this never addressed, he could get sutody and bar the bitches from ever having contact with the baby

And learn how to tie up loose ends to create an ending. What you do now in many of your stories it makes you look like you just got tired of writing and decided to stop.

Your stories are good but your endings suck. Add an epilog(sic)

ur an idgit u know nothing about victim rights u no nothing about the criminal system u no nothing about hospitals, that fucked with me the most when a rape victim is sent to the hospital they get screened for STDs not an actual law but its pretty much a rule in a hospital. just about everything in this story was wrong lol

Too many loose ends. Finish a story on your own in awhile, eh?

My condo, built in 1995, just installed cameras ~6 years ago. And they don’t always work. When someone’s car was burglarized in the secure parking area they requested the video. It turns out the camera was broken. About 9month-1year later someone else’s car was burglarized. The camera was STILL broken. I’m guessing the camera might be fixed now as the 2nd one was on the HOA committee.

So not every condo necessarily has cameras. And sometimes cameras are non-functional for one reason or another.

Oh. And I live in Silicon Valley. You’d think they’d be all high-tech and stuff.

Didn't care for the multiple endings. He should have put his soon to be ex-wife in jail.

You have good imagination but extremely poor follow through. You pick and choose what happens and what doesn't, what applies and what doesn't, especially when it comes to law and how it is applied. Makes no sense. You should feel bad, you look like someone that defends rapists, abusers, cheats, sociopaths.

Not one ending details the birth and after math,so what was the point of including it.

Shit story where you pick and chose if one law applies and another does not. Reads as if you have a fetish for this sort of abuse and humiliation.

Another one of your fetishes.

You provide multiple endings so people can choose their own ending. If you’re a good author, your readers are caught up in the story, as if it were real. As soon as we get to the multiple endings, we are reminded that it’s just something fake. The pleasure of reading goes out of it for me. Either commit to an ending or don’t bother.

Really bad story.

The author cared so little for the story that in all three scenarios he couldn’t be bothered to confirm if the child was hubby’s or not, obviously a minor plot point as far as the Farmer is concerned.

My only problem with the story is was there a baby and who was the father? Sometimes when reading a story so long without an ending it sucks.

Pick an ending and stick with it, it is pointless to waste everyone's time with three endings.

Wasted time with all the endings. who fathered the child, went unanswered.

For all the effort you put into this story, you sure left a lot of holes. If the ending had have been complete, it might have made the story tolerable. This was a horrible read.

Agree with rbloch66. Horrible just horrible

Impossible to have 3 different ends without holes, your effort was really good and I thank you for the writing

What a load of TRIPE!

Quite obviously you all have not paid attention to the story. He had the baby at the beginning of the story. Hence, the baby is his, she's in jail, and guilty. Hmmm...maybe the no sex in the story has everybody befuddled. Pay attention people.

Lesbian couple decide that they want a baby. One gets involved with a male, leads him on to believe she loves him while having a girls night out with her real Lesbian lover. But the lover also wants her significant pregnant lover all to herself so she convinces that her husband raped her in hopes of throwing the husband out so she can have her lesbian lover all to herself... But fate steps in as the significant lesbian lover actually fell in love with the man she married in order to get her pregnant...Wants more babies by the same sperm donor. So her plan is to bring her lesbian lover into the house and marital bedroom and have the husband around just to provide the baby making batter... and then allow him sex with permission from her Lesbian lover who as the story goes wants him totally out of the picture... And that's the main plot ONLY...He fights back but wants no part of her or her significant other