All Comments on 'Butch Ch. 03'

by Firsttimeforevery1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue this story, it gets hotter with each chapter

Firsttimeforevery1Firsttimeforevery1over 2 years agoAuthor

Hi, thanks for the comment! This one seems to be a real ‘love/hate’ story, if inspiration strikes I’ll carry on with it. Thanks for reading x

Darkness_Overlord97Darkness_Overlord97over 2 years ago

Even though it is unlikely, I am really hoping that something bad happens to Bruce, Zak and Jessie for what they’ve done to MC, Stacy, Max and Mike.

Firsttimeforevery1Firsttimeforevery1over 2 years agoAuthor

Hi, thanks for the comment, at this point of the story it would be pretty hard to change direction but it is an interesting idea.

I’d love to know what you did and didn’t like about this one, it’s always good to get constructive feedback from readers.

X

kinkyfreakn386kinkyfreakn386over 2 years ago

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved it soo much, cant wait to find out what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hey, what about max part 2 are you planing to write it?

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