All Comments on 'Butter Ch. 02'

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justjohn1013justjohn1013almost 19 years ago
sticky fun

Such a tease, leaving me hanging like this, all slick with butter, the sweet taste of honey still on my lips. I'm smiling though, my mind whirling as I ponder the wonderful release that's certain to result from sliding inside that sexy smoothness. Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great!

Very detailed! It felt like you were there yourself holding the butter stick!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
WOW! Great details and funny side coments to!

Loved the details and the part where you leave the story to make the reader understand about the butter's shape and size.

LOVED IT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice surprise

Unexpectly...got wood! Fun Good job I'm reading more...Tim

StoryTeller07StoryTeller07over 13 years ago
Excellent!

Liked the story, enjoyed the first person narrative, want to read chapter 1 and 3 now. storyteller07

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