All Comments on 'Butter Her Up'

You really need an editor. It has potential but the lack of capital I's, missing punctuation, run on sentences etc made it a hard read. Get an editor to help with syntax, grammar etc.

The idea was interesting. I'm confused how Butter is like glue though. Why did she have keep falling back in place? I hope you keep writing and striving to improve. We could use creative writers.

Okay so i really wasn't expecting this work to go up,but as you can see it clearly did (ah well) I'm actually working on improving my writing whilst i use this site and a few others, so sorry for the headache guys, but overall the main thing this is for is to clear out thoughts of stuff and come up with some ideas, so again sorry.

As for the whole, butter like glue, thing it's actually based on a true thing that happened, was more of a misunderstanding than anything but yeah, tons of other stories like this though, both real and made up.