All Comments on 'Buttercup 03: Snake'

Good one ST, enjoyed reading about these characters again.

Good one as always. Methinks that the verbage: " He even suggested that she might work for his firm some time in the future, if she was so inclined." could be interpreted as a certain Saddletramp setting the stage for a series of cheating cousin sequels. Be really interesting to see how one of my favorite and prolific authors here handles paying it forward.

5 stars as usual..

I was very happy to see another chapter, saddletramp. Thank you for sharing this.

My type of story preference. It was well written, all of the structure of a story and the rising action suburb. I do not read Literotica for literary porn, rather for short stories which entertain. I am 81 years old, have read all of my life. ST is one of the two dozen or so authors I favor.... thank you.

It's not a bad story, but not in the normal class of a typical ST story. :(

Excellent story as usual. Never a dull moment while reading your stories. 5 BIG FAT STARS!

Great story.

Good story!

5

You just keep writing good fun stories. Thank you.

Loved it, every part was great reading. I do hope you will write more in this category soon. Your style is easy to read and very well written.

Different but a fun read.

Threatening to assault someone is a crime and threatening to break into someone's house an rape them is also a crime. Bozo boy could have been arrested a ways back.

Good story not all mushy and some good action and loving. Not like some of the stories here where the bad guy gets away with a lot of shit or he's rich and buys his way out. The cousins did the right things and followed the law and took precautions. Good writing, as usual

GOOD STORY RIGHT UP TO AFTER THE ARREST OF RYAN. THEN IT ENDED QUITE QUICKLY. 4.25****. THE STORY COULD HAVE GONE FURTHER. AT LEAST UP TO THE RELEASE OF RYAN 5 YEARS LATERS.

REALLY CANDI, WHAT A BITCH BECAUSE YOU COULD HAVE TOLD YOUR FIANCE ABOUT TJE STALKING BF WHEN YOU ENCOUNTERED HIM AT THE REGISTRAR AND THEN A BIGGER BITCH WHO NOT OPENING A CASE RIGHT AWAY

What a well written Incest/Love story, the love story between Tim and Candi is such a warm and loving tale, since I see this was published in January of 2022, I can only hope that we will see more of this warm and loving tale in the very near furure. I just love the storyline. Well done 5++++++stars.

Many thoughts came to mind while enjoying the story. One in particular involves the futility of going through the motions in order to have a protection order issued. And then, once issued perhaps its only functional use would be as a substitute for toilet paper. Trust me on this; prior municipal LE experience. Anyway, not so sure about "accepting" any sort of "in breeding," however, the manner in which the story evolves sorta kinda eased my tension. Great job, Author!

Good story. BUT---If either of them goes to work for Hiram's law firm, they're jerks.

Nicely done. All of the stories. Great to see you venture out of LW ;)

Love a story with a good ending. Thanks for another one.

Nicely done! Thanks for sharing.

Love is love. Wether it is between cousins or two people of the same gender. As long it is true and oth people are happy everyone should be happy for the loving couple. Great story. Loved it

I enjoyed the story. I wonder if, once Candi gets her Law degree, she, Tim and Ryan will end up in a Loving Wives story?

This has been a good series, ST. I hope you write a few more chapters to it.

This was a great story and it earns five stars, for sure. I loved how mature the two cousins were in how they handled themselves in this situation. Ryan got what he deserved and Hiram became like a second uncle to them. They got through the situation and were even more devoted to each other than before. They are eagerly anticipating their exchanging wedding vows in the near future. Great story!!!

I love it. Hopefully more parts someday on their journey, snake killing and all.