All Comments on 'Butterflies'

Love it great and to the point hope for more!

I felt like it was me. Thank you and I'm glad you were nice to her. What was her name?

wonderful writing.... i felt like i was there and participating... so delicious : )

This was one of my early short stories, It was intended to put the reader as the subject hence the vague answers to the questions of name, colour choices, etc. You the reader can insert yourself into the story by answering those questions in your mind. This story approach was an experiment. As you have seen from my other stories i tend to focus on character stories where they are sharing their journey. Life has been busy recently so haven't had the focus to write as much as I would like. There are more stories on the way. luv Chloe.