by Ooopsiedooherecomesthegoo69
I very nearly didn’t read this hilarious confection, the introductory paragraphs made both protagonists seem as if you would run away to America to avoid meeting them. But you have managed a very difficult creative trick; I finished the story and found myself liking both of them despite everything, and hoping that their dotty self-employment plan would come to a successful fruition. I don’t do ‘More, please’ demands as a rule, but I think you could give both these disgraceful creatures another trot round the paddock without doing much harm! If they can ever get out of the bathroom, that is …