by MacSwain612
It is a great story. I hope the following chapters flow often enough to quench my thirst for this story/ bill
Finally, after such a long setup, mom and son fucked. Hopefully the story will progress from here to them becoming regular lovers and doesn't regress to her shutting him out.
Now we have got to son making love to Maribella and Mum how about a threesome. More please!!
Really enjoying this story and I think you are one of the most talented writers on this site. Your ability to paint word pictures is outstanding and the dialogue seems very natural and not stilted. Eagerly awaiting chapter 5. Thanks.
I am wanting to see how the 3 become a family unit and the father get his for setting them up so well. Maybe the girlfriend has a man and they were fleecing him, and the wife somehow manages to save some that they keep.
great reading so far hope there's more cumming maybe mom will get pregnant along with the girl you've definitely got a gift for writing keep up the great work
This may be the very best story that I have read on Lit to date. Please continue this.
it's absolutely awesome the way you let mom gradually discover her feelings..... YUMMY!
I was just wondering if you were planning on continuing this story or not
Having been a voracious reader all my life, I find your story fascinating and full
of insight and feelings well expressed.
Now I am sad that it all ended.
Will it continue, will I ever find it again ?
Hope is the last thing to fade in ones life, I am still hoping.
Thanks for a great read.
Please write more of this series. Thank you for writing it but I'd like more of it.
Thank you for writing. It would be nice if they could take Maribella home with them, they could get her leg straightened and then they could both fuck her easily. Also do the same if she could not get her leg repaired. Thank you for writing.
This is a great story. Very well written. Would love to see more of this story.
This is the second time I read it all...notice no additions...sure hope you are continuing this at some time..sooner than later!!!
Like others, this is my second reading and it really enjoyed it. I too want to see more, so far as I'm concerned this remains an unfinished story.
Having just read this story and also a fair few on here it has been beautifully set up and is just getting interesting, I would really like to see how these characters end up and where this story ends. Maybe they stay there with maribelka or maybe she goes back with them who knows but please finish this story.aa
Rocky70 needs a book with pictures or to get an imagination. I don't believe He was reading the same story the rest of us did. In any case please finish us off before we die from Anticipation frustration. Thank you, so get writing already. I am not getting any younger here.
Marry the housekeeper then the 3 of them can fuck anytime in the future chapters that are not coming
where's the last chapter? this is really well written - but it needs the final chapter
I see the author has not posted anything in a long time. Too bad! Love this story and wish it would get finished. It left me wanting so much more!
Just yet another unfinished story from you. Are you incapable of completing anything?
I really enjoyed this series and want it to continue , you can't leave it unfinished. Please finish it or at the very least keep it going.
Enjoyed each chapter in this series and figure you will add more to it. Your choice of words evoke pictures worthy of the artist you are. You have obviously taken great care in choosing words to paint such vivid scenes. Let me know when you add to this series.
A great well written story, but as usual with many of your works, there is an empty promise of continuation, and then nothing. No continuation, and certainly no conclusion!!
Seeing that it's been over 5 1/2 years since this was published and this was one of the last things he wrote, I'm not holding my breath for a chapter five. Too bad! It was really fucking hot!
This is truly one of the most sensitive and well-written stories I have come across while reading this site. "Dad" leaving aside-he is a major douche-the whole plot is weii-thought-out, the author has invested himself in this SO deeply.
The line about "bursting into tears", being overcome with emotion, THIS I can identify with. My wife thinks I am such a "girl" because I also suffer from being overtaken by my emotions; BUT, I will tell all of you truly, this is how a man k,owns he is invested in the relationship with his partner.
So, give the author a break, and write some comments to encourage him, and maybe, think that he has something in his life that is in the way of writing!!
MADDOG
Great story, well crafted and build.
Thanks so much for this and please keep going.
The sexual and emotional epiphany experienced by mother and son was beautiful described. The emotional and sexual chemistry between the couple is such that in real life it mostly occurs in dreams. The mother finally realizes that sex is the most physically, mentally, emotionally, and spiritually fulfilling experience life has to offer. This is a 5 star series.
Utter bullcrap story. And son trying tp penetrate his mother first time sounded more like an excavator going about slowly digging earth up. Get real!