by Moondrift
This was good but had better potential than this. Could've been fleshed out way more
I liked it. More sex detail would have been good, but all in all, short but good . I would end it right there.Keep writing.
XYZ
BUT KEEP YOUR PLACE, THIS STORY GETS HARD TO FOLLOW......THANKS
Like they say....vice is nice but incest is best.....I wonder who fucked the daughter and got her pregnant....can see brother and sister end up fucking....and why not....
FATHER FUCKS DAUGHTER , MOTHER FUCKS FRIEND OF THE FAMILY. SHE GETS CAUGHT BY HUSBAND AND DAUGHTER . NOW FATHER AND DAUGHTER HAVE TAKEN OVER THE MASTER BED, MOM IS IN THE SPARE ROOM NOW. SHE HAS TO TELL SOMEONE, SHE ENTERS HE SONS ROOM AND TELLS ALL. SON GETS HORNY , MOM GETS HORNY, MOM BLOWS SON THEN FUCKS HIM. SOUNDS LIKE A NORMAL FAMILY DON'T YOU THINK SO. ..LAROC OF AGES
This story sounds like American Taboo, when the daughter caught her mother having sex with the grounds keeper, and told the father who witnessed the act. This gave the daughter the excuse to start having an open affair with her father directly in front of her mother. The mother then had and affair with her son in the bathroom and was caught by the daughter.
This fine story by one of the masters of the annals of young motherfuckers and their satisfied Moms is notable for the love the mother has for her boy's big dick! Of course, every mother has a very special feeling and attachment to her man-child's prick and balls! Here the action starts when Mom puts her hand over Gordon's fly and discovers her son's stiff oversized cock--he's a natural born motherfucker! There's already some family fun in this house, as Dad lays pipe up his daughter's cunt! But neglected Mom is more needful than ever! Good news for Gordie boy, because between his legs he's carrying exactly what his mother is needful for! Soon son's throbbing prick and Mom's yearning twat get together and Gordie fucks his loving mother whenever the urge hits him! Mom begs her boy to fuck a baby up her cunt, and Gordon is proud and happy to oblige! His potent young balls produce LOADS of baby batter that his mother joyfully welcomes up the same warm loving twat her boy came out of some 18 years before! Babies galore!
Wordy and sluggish. Reads like a medical manual. There's little in the sex scenes that are either erotic or exciting. It's unfortunate, too, for some of the story ideas are prommising; they just donn't deliver.
The movie is "American Taboo", and the dialog is almost word for word.
there is a scene from the moovie with son and mother in the bathroom
and it seems like the dialog between them is exectly the same
is it on the purpose or mistake?
yes it is a great story .. but i feel is was short but a good one.
Thanks
You always tell a good tale. Thanks for sharing yet another one with us.
You always tell a good tale. Thanks for sharing yet another one with us.
If I could write with the ability as this author has written this story, then it would be a story like this one.
thank You for the good read ...Rich