All Comments on 'By the Book'

It was mostly decent, but from a writing perspective, there were aqkward turns of phrase, and "squealed in surprise" isn't usually something I'd associate with orgasm. But overall? It was okay. I've read far, faaaar worse. And no matter how awesome you are, there's always room to be better! :)

~U.Sidhe

WOW...best story I've read! Hands down! More PLEASE!!!