All Comments on 'By the Time I Get to Phoenix'

But you need an editor. For example: you wrote "PEAK" (the top of a mountain), when you meant "PEEK".

Waiting for Chapter 2.

Out of all the stories I've read on this web site, I've enjoyed this one the most. I love the fact that she is a little leary of her not so perfect body. He treats her like a lady and is not overly rough. Please write more!