by t0nst3rs
My birthday is Feb 14 so please- it's enough that I hate all the force fed commercialism, but I have to endure a birthday as well. At least you can just ignore it and treat it as a normal day.
Wow best college/lesbian story ever. It started with details and it wasn't rush, which I love. I then laughed for half an hour or so when 'D' force's her knee in Ryans balls. Lol best part, and its so detail it gives both point of view from both girls. Your my favortie author and this is the best story. You have great humour so add more humour if you can and make your story longer because Im not going wild long enough :) Every things really perfect.
Hot! This story had all of the right elements, and nothing felt forced or contrived. The characters were realistic the pace perfect. I hope to see a lot more from this writer.
Great story with just the right pace and buildup. I also hate Valentine's Day and love "The Notebook". Hope to read more.
Its such a shame I could only give this story a 5 because it deserves 1,000. The build-up was just perfect. The characters were realistic and believable and your writing skills really show through.
I hope we see MANY more submissions from you.
...who had trouble staying awake through the BORING build-up. I thought I was on the wrong site for the entire first part of this ho-hum story.
I enjoyed the build up, now for chapter 2 and more of the love shared by these lovly ladies.
I really like your style of writing so read this story not because of the topic but because of the author. I loved the buildup and the sex was hot.
The build-up and story was GREAT! The characters seem real and the romance was wonderful.
Why is it that the people who have the negative comments are too afraid to show themselves? I wish there was an option to NOT allow anonoymous comments and force people to leave at least an email address.<BR><BR>Okay, on to my comments on the story.<BR><BR>You know my feelings on this topic. However, over and above the girl sex, this was a truly wonderful story. Who better to fall in love with than the person who knows you best? It was a romantic story and while I'm not a fan of this category, it gets a 5 from me! Thanks for a great read (again), T!
I never comment on stories, but this was just too good to not let the author know just how well this story was paced and done. It was believable, the sex was graphic but not "in your face", and it managed to actually tell a STORY...in two pages, no less!
Fantastic, one of the best stories I've read on this site. Moving and very erotic. Excellent.
I recently discovered that I'm in love with my best friend. This is the type of ending that I hope our story will have. Brilliantly written. Every now and then there are stories on this site that just make your day. This was one of them.
Thank you for writing and posting this. Please continue with more such stories.
Absolutely wonderful. I loved the romance and GREAT ending.
I usually don't comment on stories, but this was too good not to. Good job.
wow i loved that you didnt make the other girl an instant profressional it is very belilveable its a favorite i just hope that if i have it happen to me its as sweet....
that waz absolutly 100% beautiful. the best luv story ever. u deserve numerous awards. 2 make a long story short it was beautifuly done. =)
I loved this story up until the end when it kind of cut of anticlimactically. The last paragraph killed it.
this is a awesome love story wish i could xperience that way too..more stories author..thanks
I just found it too lacking in emotion. Sorry
you were doing good until the end. the i could tell but i wont thing was a let down.
Reminded me of my situation. My best friend also likes cream colored rose and Mr. Goodbar. But she is into guys and in a relationship. She won't ever feel the same towards me nor will I ever be able to tell her how I feel.
I don't really like when people say they are virgins just because they have not had sex with men *sighs* that killed it for me. It was also extremely short, barely having any real build up or indication that the feelings were indeed mutual. Onto better lesbians stories next hopefully
Awesome story. The character developments were good. I only wish there was more sex scenes. But even though it was one it well worth it :)
Beautiful. This has been one of my favorites for years. I wish you had done a few more.
Great. Sweet. Lovely.
You're gone now, so this really is for other Lit readers.
This story makes is clear, even though it is not a true story, that fear, rather than love, is the most powerful emotion—able to surpass love in a single bound—and why many (or most?) people live such unfulfilling lives. If only we had the guts to come out and say what we want.
Is rejection truly worse than choosing to make no attempt at all?
I had a similar experience at university. It was an introduction to basic Earth Science and I was very excited. I couldn't wait for the lecture to start. I really didn't register the fact that someone sat in the seat next to mine. When I noticed her, she smiled and gave me her hand to shake. "Hello, my name is Elizabeth, let's be study partners". I fell in love instantly. I could only stare at her with my mouth wide open. This was the start of an intense and loving relationship. As she walked up the aisle to stand next to me at our wedding, she raised her hand and said "Hello, my name is Elizabeth. Let's get married".
Well done! This is a hard story to tell, it's been done so many times, but you did it very well.