All Comments on 'Bye Bye Blackberry'

Just the right amount of everything. Nice development, very nice writing. And, oh yeah, plausible. Kinky and plausible.

This is pretty wild. Molly is really hot stuff. But then there is her dark side. There is no indication that Richard is abusive at all. Powerful and aggressive (seemingly with her permission), yes. But even the harem costume wasn't really worse than wearing a bikini. And the sex after seems to be one of Molly's best experiences. <br><br>

But Molly is nasty, insulting, and threatening. A caricature of male dominance. Not just sexually aggressive but bullying as well. She essentially anally rapes him. OK, he seems to go along with it and overall it's pretty erotic but I have to ask myself if a guy did all this to a woman would it be OK? I don't think so. Anal sex with a woman is always with her awareness, consent, and with lots of care. Guys that take and are aggressive are rapists, bastards. It wouldn't be erotic. At the end she admits that she was bad. She went far outside the lines. Too far? Suppose someone he knew had seen them in the garage? She was dancing on the edge of a cliff. It had little to do with distracting him from work and far, far more to do with her own power trip. <br><br>

So I guess the story is disturbing. It's powerful and erotic. It's creative and well written. It is redeemed at the end by Molly's obvious contrition and love. But if I was Richard I would be having some LONG conversations with Molly. But part of me might be looking forward to doing it all over again.

What a great story line. Well thought out and the characters seemed real. Looking for more!

Characters are well thought out and story is seemingly realistic. Story flows easily and effortlessly. Great Job!!!

Halloween always a good setup for role reversal,but this was well written and believable.Is it Halloween yet........

great story! very well done. any of the wife's friends joining?