All Comments on 'C.A.R.P. Ch. 02'

If only !!

My admiration CP

And this is still kind of intro, nice.

"Why wouldn't he want to keep a 6 ft tall, blonde sex goddess for his own???"

because people have personalities.

Love how this is building and how the characters are being developed.

Another VERY interesting chapter...detailed enough to keep my attention, and a happy one!! Even with "Miranda" popping back up...she has it coming to her...see where this goes!

Five Stars, again!!

Why wouldn't he want to keep a 6 ft tall, blonde sex goddess for his own???

Going strong at the moment.

I really don't mean to joggle your elbow, but I am on pins and needles waiting for more. I love your work and this story has great promise.

I'm Liking it CP . Well done . Should be very interesting .

A very interesting tale. Looking forward to more.

Enjoying it muchly. Still a solid 5/5, certainly reading on as the chapters come out

Typo on “words” on first page? You wrote “worst” instead.

You have me intrigued! Write on.

It continues to be intriguing.

"Were men angels they would not need laws." Pick up a copy of--say--Robert Heinlein's "Stranger in a Strange Land," in which he argues both sides; then let us wait and see how our author lets this play out. So far...delightful.

Awesome world building as always. The story is giving off some creepy mad scientist / black ops vibes, and I love it.

Still not sure where you ae taking this. But good stuff

Interesting and something novel.

I'm enjoying the concept and I've got a guess as to where you are going with it, but it will be interesting to find out.