All Comments on 'C.A.R.P. Ch. 02'

I'm enjoying the concept and I've got a guess as to where you are going with it, but it will be interesting to find out.

Interesting and something novel.

Still not sure where you ae taking this. But good stuff

Awesome world building as always. The story is giving off some creepy mad scientist / black ops vibes, and I love it.

"Were men angels they would not need laws." Pick up a copy of--say--Robert Heinlein's "Stranger in a Strange Land," in which he argues both sides; then let us wait and see how our author lets this play out. So far...delightful.

It continues to be intriguing.

You have me intrigued! Write on.

Typo on “words” on first page? You wrote “worst” instead.

Enjoying it muchly. Still a solid 5/5, certainly reading on as the chapters come out

A very interesting tale. Looking forward to more.

I'm Liking it CP . Well done . Should be very interesting .

I really don't mean to joggle your elbow, but I am on pins and needles waiting for more. I love your work and this story has great promise.

Going strong at the moment.

Why wouldn't he want to keep a 6 ft tall, blonde sex goddess for his own???

Another VERY interesting chapter...detailed enough to keep my attention, and a happy one!! Even with "Miranda" popping back up...she has it coming to her...see where this goes!

Five Stars, again!!

Love how this is building and how the characters are being developed.

"Why wouldn't he want to keep a 6 ft tall, blonde sex goddess for his own???"

because people have personalities.