All Comments on 'Cabin Fever'

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MarkbikeMarkbikeover 2 years ago

It's an interesting and enticing start and I look forward to reading more, but it would be good to see a little more detail. I suspect that you're intentionally keeping your tale somewhat vague but definitely want to see how it develops.

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Your second story! Equally well written as your first submission. Five Stars and now Following ...

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:Stories in Progress: 1. Two friends get together in their shared camping tent. Notes: One Shot with companion piece. - 2. A prince marries the king to a rival kingdom to secure an alliance. Notes: Multi chapter, slow burn. - 3. A group of friends decide to help another with ...