All Comments on 'Caesar's Captive Women of Gaul'

Maybe Cesar takes her to the coliseum.

I know everyone is different, but a story about a woman who is raped so much that she craves death, and is then granted death by her friend, is not what I would consider tantalizing erotica.

For me, it ruins the (honestly absurd) fantasy that all humans secretly crave sex at all costs. That fantasy is present in most erotica (even most noncon). But it's a staple of the genre for a reasonable.

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Whenever a story reminds you that some people would prefer death to rape, the story is too real.

Thanks for the comment, Anonymous, and happy, sexy New Year. The scene to which you allude was inspired by a scene I read in "Spartacus." A slave girl had been pegged to the ground and raped until she died. A disgusted Roman officer asked bitterly: "Are the woman of Rome so virtuous that the whole Roman Army must rape on slave girl?" Never forgot that.

very good!

Great writing and depiction of the historical setting. More please!

Cosmo here! I just finished a long trade show at the Moscone Center in SanFran this week, surprisingly, not too many homeless around or weed in the air, maybe more of that in NYC. After the 2nd day, late Sunday night I booted up my computer to read a few stories, ahem to relax a bit :) and saw your latest story, Caesar's Captives...well it wasn't my cup of tea, ie the history channel. I moved on to a few other stories to help reach the desired "O". The second part of the show started Tuesday, it was dull but the nights were exciting, "OOOO" did I lose it, use it for a story.

Cosmo again: This black cock experience began at a trade show with a younger (30's) black man in the booth next to mine. When the foot traffic slowed up we'd get to talking, other times I could feel his gaze while I was conversing with my customers or writing notes. It made me wet and my nipples hard.. On the second day (Wed) at 4pm, some exhibitors were serving beer, others wine and cheese. One exhibitor however had a selection of whiskey, it was there this voice said, "I wouldn't have taken you to be hard drinking woman", as I turned and looked up, it was him, beaming. Laughing, I told him I came around on Scotch some years back when my then girlfriend took me to McLeod's in Seattle. With that we headed out to find a bar and after a couple of flights, a bite to eat; & well being tipsy and horny (thinking about a story or two), I suggested coming up for a nightcap at my hotel. Within minutes he was going down on my wet pussy, my clit swelled, I came hard, he stripped me down and got naked, his cock sprang out and up to my attention :), wow he was a challenge to swallow. We fucked in many positions that night, he stretched my pussy open, the whole floor probably heard us. Thursday was the final day at the show, it couldn't pass soon enough for us to start fucking again. I red-eyed home this morning and thought you could write several stories covering the week. I gotta crash now. -Cosmo