by DASTONE
1] Why would he go with her when she was delivering something to him? (Unless it was at his home? A hotel maybe?)
2] All this time, & no further stories/Chapters?!
1. I'm confused... Where did you think they were going? I'm having trouble finding anywhere in this story that describes either of them going anywhere.
2. I haven't had much time to write and the few things I've written aren't good enough for this site. The next chapter of one of my other stories is pending right now so hopefully it will be posted this week. But it's not as good as previous chapters in my opinion
I've written several submissions here and I've noticed that commenters here lately have become nasty and stupid. So my advice is to ignore the guys [or girls] who have nothing good to say, especially when they're signed Anonymous.
Better yet, delete them from the feed. You can do that from your home page.
I loved the story and gave it a 5!
And by the way the reference to delivering something was, "She may want to come with me the next time I have to deliver something to you."
Clearly, the guy commenting did not read it properly.