by Niki526
He's like the nicest celebrity I know And I know he's the perfect gentleman and he's married and I'm sure he's not gentle all the time but God I needed a fantasy starting him.
Scrolled down to comment when I read his full name.
I have high expectations for this. I hope it's good :)
James dornan, lol lovely and ms skylar grey so funny.
sounds a little like a knock of 50 Shades, but still a nice start. I hope you finish out this story line.
Very intrigue for the next chapter ! The fifty shades reference are very noticeable lol . Can't wait for the dark aspect to come out !!
What can I say, I'm a big fan of that series
I'm so sorry about the confusion, I did it that way cos I wanted the italics with no quotations to be her thoughts and the italics in quotation marks to be the actual words spoken. I hope this assists with the reading of it. I'm sorry about that, my thoughts are always jumbled up like that to, lol
Enjoy
Niki
Haha, I'm seeing the references you mentioned! The italics as speech are extremely distracting, so I suggest you put them in quotations marks non-italicized for next time. Other than that, I'm excited to see how this progresses!