All Comments on 'California Diaries'

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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesabout 4 years ago
Resurrexit!

I am delighted that the Kristie and Britt story has been revived. I missed it as I'm sure others have too. I'm looking forward to Britt's new chapter. But what happened to the long haul adventure? Did that end? Did I miss a chapter? I thought there were some loose ends, that everything had not been resolved. I could be wrong. I have been before and do regret it and apologize for it.

Additionally, I am somewhat disappointed that the diary appears not to be a recitation of actual events in the guise of a "recherche du temps perdu". Well, whatever the truth may be, despite a couple of minor grammatical glitches, the story was the typical five-star effort. Accordingly, I rated it so. And, again, thanks for the revival.

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67about 4 years ago
Wonderfully Romantic and yet Erotically Charged - FIve Stars

Fantastic imagery... love the element of discovery, that breathy anticipation and wonderment of the first time, captured here so deliciously!

jc01xxxjc01xxxabout 4 years ago
Excellent! Five Stars!

Loved it Skye. Super arousing tale of love and revelation.

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopabout 4 years ago
Beautiful young love

I so enjoyed this story. Your creation, in my opinion, is spot on. I get goose bumps remembering the first time. I realize this is fiction; however, it is so close to real. My friend’s name is April and we were in about 9th grade. We haven’t been together lately but we have had a lot of fun over many years. First loves are always special. Thanks for the wonderful story. Xoxoxoxo Annette

Brittni4uBrittni4uabout 4 years ago
Amazing! Hot!

Once again Skye-sub has captured our feelings in this 5 star great concept. She is a brilliant a writer as she is a person. I love you KYT and always will! ...kisses..Britt

Kicker73Kicker73about 4 years ago

I followed Britti4u and I saw her diary story; Such a unique perspective. I decided to follow you and I am glad I did.

I would love more of the double perspective.

Thank you both for your stories.

kermitt551kermitt551about 4 years ago
Absolutely Amazing

You are an amazing writer, Love the story and that you and Britt wrote some together . I really enjoy reading all your stories :) keep up the great work

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I've always enjoyed writing stories, reading others' work and interacting with other writers. Most of my stories are autobiographical with some of my fantasies thrown in. I used to be a truck driver but now work in the Parks Department freezing my ass off outside all winter. ...