All Comments on 'California Dogging'

I'm really, really hoping this dogging stuff doesn't make it to the US. It's bad enough that it exists anywhere, but happy to leave it to the messed up Brits.

Leaves a husband behind, and her children, and risks getting any of a dozen possible STD's, or kidnapped, even murdered. For an 'adventure'? Insane.

Keep doing this and she’ll end a crime statistic when they find her body in the bushes.

Stupid premise 1/5

So short, but so much fun. Not a word wasted. I kind of expected that when I saw that you had about 75 Followers per story, to the 10 per story a Good writer has. Keep 'em coming.

Nicely done. The LW crowd would have destroyed this lol.

Quite an adventure for a housewife! Is this the LA version of dogging? I guess she liked it, because she plans to come back. Or maybe she hated it, but is a masochist in the extreme? Or maybe she just hates her boring life and her boring husband and went overboard for adventure; it was either this, or sky diving? Or maybe she wants to secretly punish her husband: He'll never know, but she'll always keep her little secret of infidelity, with her every smile always being, just a little bit, a smirk? I'd better stop before I exceed 750 words! 5*~~JB

Very well constructed story given the economy of words.

Well written as always. Really hot!

Great story! 5.

Nice! Always interesting to see if an author can nail a good story given the 750-word limitations. You have done so, sir!

Well written, and a decent story. I'd love to see what you could do with it without the word cap. I think it would have been better served to give less detail to the environment and more to the scene itself, or even the introspection of the character. Still a good read though.

Nice mmmmmmm

Wish it was me with younger guys 😍

You were right ,loved it. Did something very similar only hubby was there watching xx

5 stars

Let us hope this becomes a thing in the US.

Great story!

Short but sweet! I loved it!

Just another slut

Five stars!

Excellent job of getting a whole story within the 750 words. You build character quickly and efficiently, and your descriptions are evocative. 5 Stars.

Can you expand the story to tell in detail how she was used and how she enjoyed the adventure