All Comments on 'California Dreamin' Pt. 01'

I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter

Looking forward to see how it develops. Enjoyed it.

Nice start to a potential great one.

FYI - drug is a noun, a pharmaceutical. Drag as a verb means pull along. Past tense of drag is dragged, not drug.

Liked the story. Would like to see where it goes. Liked your writing, did wonder how big was the refrigerator to evaporate the sweat from his brow, was it a walk-in? Did he stick his head in for a few minutes. Thanks for your story

Thanks all for the nice comments, and the proofreading. : )

Hope you’ll all enjoy the next chapters. 3 should be released tomorrow!

Is this set at Pepperdine? Don't know of any other schools that close to the ocean.

@RightSized - nope, just a made-up school. Love the Huntington beach area, so that's where I plopped the story down.

Very well written.

California dreamin' Wow, I can't wait to read more. Thank you.