All Comments on 'Call Me Cade Ch. 01'

I like how it started. There is some mystery here. It would be fun to see if someone was "immune" to the coin.....

just an idea.

keep it coming. very interesting story. your idea of further character development sounds intriguing

It is a wonderful start I like the quality of your writing. keep it up!

You write that the coin affects all women differently. Any chance that some of them realize they are acting against their will but can't stop themselves anyway?

A nice first installment.

You could make him go to kill a woman but can’t because she’s 1. As a child or 2. Beautiful and he falls for her could even make him fall for the guy who employs hims daughter loads of ideas very much reminds me of Jonah hex

I like it! It's a fast-paced intro, but well executed, and interesting enough to draw readers back in for more if you do decide to continue the series.

Would love to read more on Cade

I have read all of your stories and commented on several . I think this is your best so far I would love to see a lot more of it

Hope for you to continue with this one as it is favourite western stories. You write very well enjoy all your work read it all I know it will be quality stuff.

Thanks again for your effort.

I would love to see you try o create a story with just one woman. This would inevitably be less sex focused , but I think it creates a richer, less tired storyline. Lots of your stories seem to be apppropriate for something like this (such as this one.)

Great work either way!

PS a good example of a story like this is A Loner Mentalist

I'm glad we are getting another story based on a Western theme. I like the idea you purposed, a cowboy with magic. So many directions that could take.

Did I mention the story, so far, is really good, pulled me right in, didn't have to stumble over bad grammar, misspelled and misused words.

Keep the chapters coming!!

more cade please

Love the idea. Not enough westerns these days for a kid who grew up in the50’s and 60’s. Great twist too :) Great writing also, so thank you and look forward to more. Have you read Great and Terrible Things on Lit? It’s under Novels in the hall of fame section. Great western

Ed:)

Your one of the rare authors who manages to balance good storytelling and exciting sex, so I’ve been binging your story’s recently. I can’t wait for the next installment!

More Cade

Bring on more Cade! Amazing idea

i like the character, i would like more stories.

Stuff set in modern day is better, I think, more relatable as a fantasy. Also, do you ever bring breast growth into your stories? i think itd be something fun for you to play around with

Bring on more Cade

If I may make a suggestion make the girls more reluctant, like the Talisman hasn't completely taken over their mind.. Have them question it and have to be convinced, maybe even forced, a struggle. With the gang of girls have some completely entranced and some fighting it, the ones not resisting coercing their friends to let cade fuck them

I like your writing. Its imaginative and well put together. But the whole "I dont want you" - "yes you do" - "oh right, yeah I do now, please fuck me" doesnt really do it for me.

I'm usually into darker stuff, may i make a suggestion for further Cade?

Bring in more non-conesnt mind control. Have them fight the coins power instead of just roll over, love the guy and then live happily ever after.

Have the girls question the situation, why they're getting fucked 4mins after meeting this guy, bring in coercion, use the ring to convince them cades a sheriff or some point of authority and once they're mind controlled into believing cade have him blackmail them for sex. Maybe, just an idea I'd love to see you write, maybe with the female gang have some of the girls completely enthralled by the coins power and then have them coerce their friends, who are fighting the coins power, into letting cade fuck them

I think the story line is pretty good but a bit more after the fact would be good also. Leaving a catch word to put them back under. Bring them out of the trance as they climax could also add another dimension

Very good story, cant wait to read more!

More

I notice it's a while since you wrote this, but I hope you decide to do more.

I know it's been a while, but are you still interested in this? I've enjoyed it and see a lot of potential.

Like the protagonist's blend of some good with some evil, hope you write more

I would definitely enjoy more of this.

Like others would love to see more Cade!

The only bad part of the story is that it's keeping me on the edge of my seat. Hope you can get to adding more soon

Love the first chapter and can’t wait to read more. An all female gang of cattle rustlers and magic coin - sounds as though Cade is in for an interesting future. Please publish it Thank you

Since it has been over five years since the first installment, we probably should not expect anymore. That is a pity. This was a short, brief snapshot of an excellent concept. If you do not choose to pursue this further, perhaps you could hand it off to someone else in search of a good idea.

I have just encountered the story, and enjoyed it greatly. It appears that six years have passed since it appeared on the site.

If you were looking for inspiration, you could find some old episodes of “Have Gun Will Travel. While, reading your story, I was picturing Richard Boone, with the addition of a magic coin.