All Comments on 'Call Me Marion'

by FridaFischer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

have her end up pregnant!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That was such a hot story. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My mother's name was Marian. This brings back good memories. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really good story and needs chapter 2 where she gets pregnant

JoeehartleyJoeehartleyover 2 years ago

Thanks for the read

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Just an average piece of fiction.

Thanks for sharing.

timbrewulftimbrewulfover 2 years ago

I liked it a lot. A bit short,but I'm sure there is much more to cum isn't there? Much more details on moms dress, underwear, stockings panties high heeled shoes. Did she fuck him in her stockings and heels? Surely he will take her ass shortly!! Not pregnant please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well done Marion. Please expand a very good start. The romance and over-excited Paul make a back-story essential; so wrap those fingers around the son's mind and the mom's libido and stroke your readers' lust.

raraewriterraraewriterover 2 years ago

Nice. A bit of background would be nice, too. Keep going, but no pregnancy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can't wait for chapter two and what the next day and their future brings.

DunkirkDunkirkover 2 years ago

Now that they are lovers Paul needs to breed his mother.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 2 years ago

Good read - very hot.....Please continue.

EverReady12EverReady12over 2 years ago

A bit short but well written. Certainly worthy of another chapter or two. Good job.

FridaFischerFridaFischerover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you all for the comments! This was a quick story I wrote the day before the Valentine's competition closed, so excuse the brevity.

Your comments have given me the strength to plough on and write more filthy fucky stories! <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
I liked it a lot 5 stars

Write more please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nice story,mum and son falling in love. It can only get better....

jildijowwithanoutlookjildijowwithanoutlookabout 2 years ago

Would have loved it more if l had have been in it!! jildijow@outlook.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

My mom gave me pity sex when I was going through chemo. When I went into remission we got more aggressive. Now I’m back to full health and I still plow her multiple times a week. She was there for me when no one else was. No can love me the way she does. Her pussy is my true home.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

when mother and son find a love for each other that brings forth a sexual coupling between then, this must surely be the ultimate mother/son love....

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome story loved how it all came together with mom and son having a sexual encounter and there love for each other but you need to continue with this story gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!

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