by xelliebabex
yes this is the very best series you've written ..lol and ive read them all so far your by far my favorite author on here..
if he shares callie he may just lose her...seems jamie carl and others want her too and they may not be able to control themselves and stick to the rule. meaning even though he would say she was on loan, they would want her for keeps. paddy didn't learn squat from sally.
keep up the series. its your best one imo.
this story is being scored too low. so it must be the category because this story is worth a higer rating.
Thank you so much for your continued support it means the world to me. I don't think it would matter how much I wrote or how quickly there would always be one person asking for more. So I than you all for your patience and ind words, I truly appreciate each and every comment :)
Hey ellie loved this chapter. I just gotta point out one thing that someone else pointed out last chapter I thought rule 1 was daddy will love calli no matter what. Daddy knows best was the 2nd rule. Noot that big of a deal but I don't u changed it lol. Again great chapter and I'm going to read owninngbella now :-)
ive been waiting ages this is your best on so far please add more!
Thank you so much for this great story. I can't wait for more... please!
I miss your writing. Come back soon....sending you creative vibes...and naughty daddies ;D L
One of the best on this site, so well written. I have learnt so much from reading the series, so hot yet sensual.
I've noticed many times in the last series and seen it already a couple times in this one, you refer to Paddy as "she" or "her". Is this typos or is there a reason for it?
Getting boring here 5 stars, again !! Cannot fault the story it's tempo or its characters but a few typo's and omissions which I am able to work out as I read so no great issue there. But the story itself is very good. Which other commentators seem to agree with me, judging by their positive comments. Well done.
Very interesting and quite different. Written very well; I had to follow it to see how it ended.