All Comments on 'Calvin & Polly'

Well done. A little soft for me but a sweet story. A well-written story with a simple plot. A longer story should have some conflict between partners or another person. Keep writing.

Found a lot of the dialog to be cliche. For example: "Calvin, my young lover. Take me now. I am now and always will be your girl. Make love to me Calvin."

I cannot believe anyone would really talk this way. There are other examples. The story premise is okay but the dialog is a bit off.

Thank you for sharing your talents with the community!

Now that was a story I enjoyed very much. It was gentle and not in the least pornographic, and when you are in love there is no such thing as age difference. The writer now has to give them a life together.

The Old Codger.

***Thanks for the read.🙄

Good story!

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