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Click hereEllie undressed as well, turned off the ligths and laid down next to the drunk girl.
"Hey Camille, do you want to be a good girl for me? You do want to live here for free don't you?" Ellie whispered into Camille's ear. Camille groaned a bit, but noticeably stirred when being called a "good girl". Ellie didn't explain any further before grabbing Camille by the back of her head, guiding it down to her breast and placing the nipple into her mouth. Camille didn't protest, and started sucking and licking, feeling the nipple harden in her mouth.
Ellie was in absolute bliss from the sensation, as she had gradually built up her arousal during the night, imagining what she'd want to do with Camille if given the chance. She started to masturbate with her right hand, her left hand pressing Camille's head into her chest as she loudly made her way towards an orgasm while Camille gradually fell asleep.
**Hi, thanks for reading this first part! Please let me know about any feedback you might have about the story, good or bad. Comments are always appreciated!**
- COMMENTS
Fluidswallowerabout 1 year agoVery sexy, The slow seduction of one somewhat unsuspecting person by anotheris always a turn-on, at for me. I'm looking very much forward to Camille succumbing to Ellie's advances.
Nice writing.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoGood start. Perhaps needs to flow more, you jump around a bit.
On to part 2!
Migbirdabout 2 years agoLike this piece; captured my attention with intriguing albeit maybe a bit stereotypical characters, interesting, maybe predictable storyline and just enough teasing sex. The beginning background is very well done, and Camille’s self reflection early on heightened my curiosity and creates just a bit of tension: “It had only been a few weeks since she ruined everything for herself,…”. Now if that is about flunking exam, the line is uninteresting as we already know that, so maybe about something more personally consequential. Thought that the conversation with Ellie is drawn out a bit much and interrupts the flow/pace. From a storyline perspective, after a half hour of conversation followed by more probing followed by progressing into private topics — hours of conversation and we learn almost nothing about Camille’s shortcomings (other than what we glean from her behavior and the verbs/descriptors you use to describe her behavior). Maybe that is by design. Long/short: looking forward to seeing where you take Camille and your readers. Oh, by the way, you’ve posted in the past, so you know enough to smile and ignore snarky comments.
