All Comments on 'Camming My Sister'

It's a good start. No glaring grammatical or spelling errors, which is a huge plus. ;) The pacing is a bit off, though, and it felt rushed. For my tastes, I prefer a bit more description, too.

You're definitely on the right track and heading in the right direction . Maybe they could try a make-believe 69 ?

This could even have parts 3 and 4 .

I would willingly take the place of your sister if she decides not to go any further.

I want to hear more about this story. Good beginning. Keep it up (and keep on writing, too)

I enjoyed the story . . . especially because you and your sister conjured the idea up together. That made it extra hot. However, I think it would have been much more erotic if you had taken a bit more time with it. Have sis be very reluctant at first until brother finally talks her into it over the course of the story. She just agreed a bit too fast. Anyway, nice start. Let's hear more about these two.

A video sight? More of the same uneducated so-called writers. Site, not sight! Did you go to school or drop out?!?!?

wow! somehow I missed this and I'm a frequent visitor. great story! And I love the picture of your sister. I wish you'd write another sequel.

i want someone to continue dis story