All Comments on 'Camouflage'

Up until that time she was drunk and possibly drugged. It was hard to completely blame her for what happened. But the next day she was completely sober. The last line only confirms her as a slut.

All is not lost! Yes, I guess it is.

Mature woman in a seemingly happy marriage is now dreaming of having another threesome !!

She is totally ok with her husband being drugged ( we assume he was drugged ) , and uncaring of the risk of passing something nasty, or deadly, on to him.

Not sure why I am bothering to comment on this .... I guess I just get so annoyed at such shallow individuals.

Could have been a far better story with a little bit more thought.

Why stop now? At least show Maria's response when she receives the first email, with photos, demanding money. How do you think these scum pay for the motor home? And why do you think they stay on the move?

This story is ripe for continuation, and eventual nuclear retribution. I hope someone has the balls and talent to write it.

Will allow her to do whatever she wants and not piss off her former husband or the kids. Just let her think like an honest whore forma change

use all the subterfuge they can get, TK U MLJ LV NV

another day another dumb ass retarded comment from annony!!

It's a work of fiction!

Do people scream and rant at the writers when someone else is killed on "Murder, She Wrote?"

"Yeah! I give that Jessica Fletcher minus three million votes!"

On some level, do people who use that idiotic argument realize how stupid and ignorant it makes them look? By your "logic" no criticism of any work of fiction would be valid.

Thanks for the read.

I'm not a camper and as crazy as this story sounds I know a couple of guys that alway camp that have had a crazy trip or two. One time there group met two sisters 18 and 19 and the smoked pot and drank all day . One kid was getting a blow job while the other was fucking the other and the parents came looking for them . The guys said they saw them and were sure they would be back. Making them comfortable with drinks . They talked the parents into smoking pot also and let them eat with them after the girls reappeared. After hours of getting wasted the girls walked off with two different guys and there dad fell asleep very wasted in a lounge chair. The wife was getting touched all night and was feeling no pain when two guys started playing with her and before she knew it they were fucking the living shit out of her. They did it all DP , Anal tit fuck , they had her rim the ass holes. Came on her face in her mouth , in her pussy and up her ass. They also videoed it all . She felt really bad the next day and begged them to keep it quiet . That was Thursday night and by Sunday when the guys left 6 of the ten guys fucked the wife, all ten fucked the two daughters in one form or another and the hubby was a clueless idiot. They also did a circle jerk the last night and all came on the wife's face. Crazy but true and I saw the video so I know it really happened. The girls were a little slutty but the mother claimed the drugs and booze did her on and when the first night passed she decided to keep it as a one weekend crazy event that hopefully no one will ever know but I got yo set her screaming as they doubled teamed her. I'm sure after all the ass fucking she limped around for a few days. This was six years ago and a couple of guys fucked her when she came to the city on business a few years back. The one sister hooked up with a couple of guys down in Florida and they also were relentless for the two nights of fucking. It's sad because they all said how great the family was but they didn't mind fucking the wife and daughters. The poor guy was clueless,

Are you sure Sam's name wasn't Britease?

Maria will fuck someone some day. Sam will find out, divorce her cheating ass, kick her to curb, find a good woman and live happily ever after. So JazzE2 only tells a third of the story. The rest is the hurt that Maria brings to Sam and herself. Tell the rest of story and be real.

AS A WARNING,

Against drinking with stangers, excellent.

As logical thinking on wifes part! Where's her doubts and fears?

So 1 star.

Just a cheating whore in the end.

Cheaters will be caught if they keep doing it and destroy their marriage to someone they claim to love.love like tha is worthless.if you can't be faithful don't get married.the twins need their junk stomped into paste

Two loser dudes having geriatric sex with an old scuzzbag. Wow!

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