All Comments on 'Camp Hideaway Ch. 01'

I think this might become my new favorite series! PLEASE write more!

Still working. Still writing. Still much more busy with day to day family and life responsibilities than I was when I originally started writing these stories. I really appreciate that so many people are still invested in the continuation of my work after all these years.

I also understand that my slow pace is frustrating for some. But at least for now, this is just a fun hobby for me. Thanks to all of you who have been gracious and encouraging in your comments and emails!

Wow... Six months since EZs last update, and still nothing, zero, nada, squat.......

4.8, really worst story.....where is oral sex pussy licking....this is a ordinary story.

good story,,nice hook! should make this story longer,,

Please add to this story!

where is part 2

CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO!

Awesome😃hope it continues

I'll certainly read the next chapters.

EZ’s Bio update says that he is alive and about to start writing again !!!

After waiting almost 4 years for him to get back to business, all I can say is HURRY and give us Chapter 2......

Hope to see the part 2 of this story or Family First very soon.

Excited to hear you're still writing!!!

bruh. where the parr 2

Maybe you were right not to write, or anyway not to submit, the story that we, your readers, were expecting after that "To be continued..." Not in almost 4 years now. You were right because you've triggered our fantasies about all possibilities of family sex in Camp Hideaway that wonderful summer, plus lots of inter-family sex, plus very romantic, but soon also very intense sex with childhood friends, like very shy Zoe, who will, no doubt, turn into the most passionate lover and wife and mother.

You could have submitted a sequel, but when you didn't you triggered steaming hot fantasies in your readers' dirty minds. Thanks a lot for that.

EdMarcgrave (not anonymous even if I had to post this as 'Anonymous', as I didn't have my log-in data on my cellphone.)

where's the sequel?

Where's chapter 2?

Well certainly had my cock drooling , very hot read indeed. Oh what a great life it would be with a family like that.

I desperately want a chapter 2. this is one of the best incest stories I've read. you included male on male which I'm here for but I do so want to hear about his sister when he gets back to the bungalow

I hope the author gets more time to write and continue with the story. The possibility here are endless. 5 🌟

Please....i love this!

Don’t leave us hangin!! Please come back with any updates!!!

Skip to the class the next day, it would help you not have to introduce so many characters at once. Hope to see more soon!

I applaud your inclusion of male on male sex in the story and addressing the stereotype of putting labels on every action. It is refreshing to see your vision in the writing of a very engrossing and complex story. Thank you.

Please continue this story. I"m always coming back to this site just to check to see if the next chapter is posted.

we need more.... to many open story\s

Dying to see what happens when they get back to the cabin

Almost time for your yearly update! Keep going please

Need more about other people at the camp. Mom has has her fill of her son

loved it.

Excellent story would love to read part

2

When will you be continuing?

This story could go on and on for chapters after chapters...... more please!

please continue this story

When is the next chapter.

I am very pleased to read about situations where young people lose their virginity with respectful knowledgeable adults. I would have appreciated some reality about contraception and disease control being added to the mix of joy with a caring first partner. I look forward to additional chapters describing the adventures and learning as members share with peers and interesting strangers.

Pleeeeeease continue this!!!

waiting for a new chapter for 2 years now. pls come back and give us more

This is absolutely great. The idea of a hedonistic adult summer camp where people can escape their lives for the summer and just have sex whenever and wherever they want year after year, while building friendships along the way is literally a dream of mine I could only hope to live. Then again I firmly believe that any sex so long as it is consensual and done between adults is great. As to the story itself it was well written and I enjoyed to thoroughly. I actually like that you added gay sex into it. It’s seems believable to me because while I am straight and have never done anything with another guy I won’t ever rule it out. Pleasure is pleasure and in a hedonistic social group that is doubly so.

Liked most the story. Couple parts I could do without. What's amazing is 78 comments and only 3 of them negative. That must be a Literotica record or the author has wore the delete key of his keyboard.

You have great set ups for various avenues, and I'm curious if Connor and Zoe talk, among other things, and the notion of him exploring his bi-curiosity is intriguing, please bring us chapter 2

please continue this series... this is AWESOME!!!

also waiting for more, keep going!

Add me to the list! I keep checking on EZ’s stories a couple times every week. Still hoping for a Camp Hideaway Ch.2. Hopefully, some day, maybe, EZ will be back writing. What a great day that will be ......

Same here, I probably check all of EZ's story list two or three times a week

i come and check up on your page every week lol. hope the author is doing ok and waiting for a chp 2 desperately.

They’re not! The time I have available for writing is just very limited. I think about this series every day and all the things I’d like to do with it, and I absolutely plan on continuing it as soon as I can!

Another vote for more of this! You developed the characters so well, and hinted at much more to come.

Please write more of this place and the characters who inhabit it.

Five Stars. One of the best on Literotica. I hope the author is still writing but appears that he has not posted any stories recently. Many comments have asked for a Ch. 2 . Just hope they are not falling on deaf ears?

Great story be nice to have some more

Let me add my vote for more chapters. So many possibilities with the new campers being with both their family and friends and friends families. Please don't leave us hanging.

It’s been over one year since Camp Hideaway was posted. What is taking so long EZ? Please continue with your writings and hopefully a Ch. 2 about the adventures at Camp Hideaway.

DNA

Very nicely done. The fact that you have developed the characters so well and taking your time with the story makes it a pleasure to read. Looking forward to the next chapters?

So refreshing and welcomed to see a good sex story that treats same sex so nonjudgmentally. This is a fun story and it certainly is keeping me hard, throbbing and gushing! Thank you!

What a great chapter !! I assumed what would happen at Camp Hideaway's Adult Camp,but never thought that the new campers would be initiated by their parents. "Incest is best,the game the whole family can play !!"

Yes, please more chapters. I realize how long it takes to write good porn, and appreciate your efforts so far, but where's the next chapter? I need to "see" Cameron and Zoe having both oral and genital sex - maybe even anal...

I am looking forward to more of this, and especially for more bi sex.

I am looking forward to the continuation of this story. If you have a Patreon or something I would be happy to donate!

You need to continue this, its too good.

Do you have a patreon or something??

Can't wait to read more of this story!! Looks like this could lead into a series many hot family times

excellent. Want to see gang bang on sis

One of the most hot stories on Literotica

Please finish this

I, for one, want to know what happens between Connor and Zoe-she seemed so upset about what was going on!! But, you know the old saying..."You gotta watch out for those QUIET ONES!!" I hope she is able to overcome her hesitations, and Connor is able to talk to her to help her out as a friend...and then MORE!!

MADDOG

This would be like a dream come true to spend the summer with your family and friends in a sexual paradise. I hope we hear more of this special hideaway and the sexy fun this family gets up to.

Great Story!

Please do continue.. Look forward to read more of this story!

Ohhh Man, what a story! Five Stars from me. Hopefully, chapter 2 will have a full family orgy with both sets of Connor’s grandparents taking part. Maybe have the grand parents talking about their experience at Camp Hideaway. I would like to see Connor and his Mom hook up with his ex- girl friend Jenny and her Dad, in a four way, having fun and swapping partners. I am not into gay sex, especially father & son, I jumped past that part, so thanks for the warning. I think this could be the beginning of a great series. I’ll be looking forward to Ch 2. Like I said.....Man what a story!

The idea was pretty over the top ( not that I haven't read or thought of similar settings) and at least you made the main character have missgivings and struggle a little which made the story more reasonable. And of course all the SEX was hott!!!!!

Hope for more chapters soon thanks

Keep writing, eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

It’s good so far but to much action all in the orientation but keep it up can’t wait for more

Can’t wait for the next chapter. I hope he sucks his dad’s cock and fucks his sister soon.

Such a good story! I’m eager for more!

Could have skipped the gay father son fuck. Pretty good story other than that.

Fantastic story that is pushing all of my buttons. I'm really going to enjoy the male bi action. Looking forward to lots of family group sex. I hope I can keep track of all the family members! Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you!

I hope there is more to it. Thank you so much for writing!

Loved it all! Can hardly wait to read the next chapter! Only wish summer camp had been this steamy!

Seriously more to come please!!

It was amazing and I enjoyed all of it! It took me to a happy place

Obviously you and the great majority of readers have had fun with this story. So please keep it going, I'm sure your talent can keep us entertained for many more chapters and yummy combinations. Thank you!

Absolutely loved it..

I got lost in the words and my imagination was running wild. I didn't even realise it was 6 pages long until i had finished.

I loved it.

Great combination of pairings and open to so much more. I also agree that Zoe has a little something extra to add to the plot!

Absolutely fantastic! Immediately among my all time favorites. I can't wait to read more and see where it goes!

Secret camp orientation orgy for 18 year olds with a parent?

good fantasy, but not in front of the whole gang. 4 for creativity.

Wow! I hope you thought this through because you could easily be adding 20-30 chapters to your first installment! I wish you had a means of alerting us to when your next chapter is released! And I feel sorry for the closed-minded people who feel that ‘gay’ sex has no place here. Open your minds, people!!

Great into to hopefully a long series. It doesn't feel like a six page story with the great action and smooth writing style. And while I'm not sure how the other comments have taken it, but the bisexual action to me is just an extra level that I love to see. Can't wait to follow these folks as long as you keep sharing.

This was truly fantastic. Sex without boundaries! Very hot. Can’t wait for chapter 2

I loved the story from start to end. Sex is sex whether it is man & woman, man & man, or woman & woman it should be all about expressing our live for each other and giving each other the most pleasure possible. Great writing can't wait for next chapter.

I could have given this story double 5 stars if not for the gay stuff.

Well, you mentioned before hand that there's going to be gay things going on anyway. But the whole premise of the story is really very exciting except for the gay part. I'm sure you'll gonna have lots of positive comments if you just leave the gay stuff to the gay category instead of here.

Still can't wait for Connor and his sister Cindy to fuck. And also for Connor to fuck his former girlfriend Jenny.

Oh, I'm also excited to find out the sexual interaction between

Connor and the ever shy Zoe.

This is an awesome beginning for an epic tale of family sex. So many different families. And they all get to share their love of sex within and outside of the family. I really appreciate the inclusion of full pansexuality within the family. If you are going to have sex with family, you should have sex with everyone in the family. And yes, I love pussy, but I know the pleasures that a cock can give too. Yum!

Really looking forward to several additional chapters. There are so many story threads to follow. Definitely looking forward to his first family orgy. And then initiating some man sex with his best friend. I am interested in Zoe's tale too. Somehow I think she is hiding a cock under her skirt...

Again... awesomely hot story. Very well written. Please, please, please keep going with it

That was soo hot!!

I love the open mindedness and sexual freedom of the story. A good story is one where the reader gets lost in it and instead of reading, it becomes visual. That's what hsppened with me. I could completely visuslise being there. It was so erotic and liberating. I just wish there was a place when consenting like minded people could connect like that;)

Keep the stories cumming<3

Brilliant, Superb story of fun packed Sex.

Enjoyed this very much (despite the gay stuff which I have no interest in at all) and am looking forward to reading more.

Think I will reread this a few more times till the next chapter comes out!

well written, very eroticstory. loved it all. to the "Anonymous" who said "no fag shit" - he's the inarticulate asshole. Hope to see more. soon. but not before we see more "Family First"! great start, though, to a new series.

Well written, excellent plot, room in story for many chapters, looking forward to seeing how this story develops,,,, PLEASE MORE!!!

Yep that was hot. More please

This is a great and wonderful start to what could be a long series, if you so choose. The writing is good and the plot is amazing. Thank you for writing and sharing.

Really digging the story.

To the anonymous troll who wrote "No fag shit in the incest section.". He said up front there was gay stuff, get over it. I'm not into the gay stuff myself but I really like the open sexual atmosphere of the story. Looking forward to more.

So very well written, and extremely hot. Your buildup to the orientation was excellent in capturing Connor's anxiousness. The various scenes were well described and vivid. I don't particularly like gay sex scenes, but you seemed to handle it very well. Looking forward to the continuation of this storyline. 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I don't go looking for errors, I just read and enjoy. I loved this story and can't wait for part two. My wife read it after me and that proved very "Interesting". Roll on part two. Ok let's read part one again :-)

Great start so far not much into gay stuff but pulled it off well. I hope you can pull Zoe out of her funk would love to see how that works out. 5 stars