All Comments on 'Camp Sutton Pt. 01'

All chapters of this novel will be released on here eventually, but you can already read the full first 20k word installment on any device through the link on my page!

Nice job my dick is hard

Wonderfully written, the expressions and emotions of the girls is terrific. So want the next Chapter to be here for me to dive in. 5 stars

Wow!! You can really write! Now I am going to have to read all of your other stuff! Can’t wait for the next installment! Yeah, way too many “!’s” or “bangs” as we used to call them…

Good start but spoiled by the drugs reference.Why do you writers always have to include drugs in your stories?.I know that it s a common thing these days but I for one don't want to see it and have it shoved in my face.No thanks.Hence only 3 stars.Sorry.

Twowayman62

A very promising beginning. I can already tell that this will be a series that I will thoroughly enjoy. You write very well and I'm already a little in love with Maisie and I'm hoping that she will eventually show Jackie the true path to happiness. Maybe Maisie May indeed. Five stars.

Well done!