All Comments on 'Camping'

Kid go back to grade school and learn again what you should already know. In many locations you used "i" when it should have been "I" a mistake any 10 year old doesn't.

Thanks for the input. As I have only written BDSM stories, I have my checker set to "ignore" for any time the letter "i" is not capitalised, as I write from the viewpoint of a submissive. This is my first try at a story in any other genre, and I didn't think about the differences in accepted conventions. I will certainly be more aware the next time I write for another genre.

Enjoyable in every way possible. Reminded me especially of our honeymoon backpacking in the Rocky Mountains. Loved the free flowing, thought stream style... exceptionally well written...thank you!