All Comments on 'Camping in the Rockies Pt. 02'

I would have thought he might have knocked Clara up by now with no birth control unless I missed it somewhere.

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NOW IT'S ALL IN THE OPEN, AN NOW WE HAVE. ARCHIE, EDITH, GLORIA, AND

MEATHEAD(MIKE). IT'S ALL IN THE FAMILY, NICE WAY TO END..THANKS

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I was stoking most of the story

The whole dad ending part wasnt necessary or wanted.

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I loved the story but I'm disappointed that they didn't knock the mother up. I'd really love to see someone bred in the next chapter. Maybe Clara's bff or a cousin. Or maybe the contraceptive shot failed in either the mother or daughter or even better both.

Oh I like the sister! She's badass! I like how possessive of her man (brother) she is. Go girl! You're the boss!

Thanks, Originsunknown! Your 'Camping in the Rockies' is much fun, and unusually well written!

I enjoy FAMILY FUCKING stories. This was a great THREE SOME story.

I hope you can continue this group. How about adding Mom's brother and bring in the aunt.

Excellent writing!

What a family, need a score card to see who's fucking who.

Maybe have Allison join them next time they go camping - off duty of course so she can stay overnight.

Started out fine. But then got out of hand.

Bill

I liked it! Good grammar and editing too. I'd end it there and move on, but that's your choice. Keep writing.

XYZ

A very good story. I love it when dads grt to fuck and eat their daughters. Mom and son was hot also. Good story liked it all.

Worth the 2 year wait.

5 Stars and more.

Great story line.

What is next?

Not my thing with father involved. Not sure why that’s always been a bad situation for me.

Maybe it’s because you read and hear about so many situations where the father forces his daughter into things she wants no part of. Not sure. It is your story and you should write what you want to say.

I would ask that when you have a father situation, you label it, so I and any others who want tomay skip it. No offense, just asking for some disclosure.

Al

Fun read.

Didn't care for the parents to get involved............ ruined it for me.......

Considering the vid he was watching when mom first caught him, it would be fun to re-enact that with dad. Maybe in the next part?

(5/22/2023) Not into daddy daughter stuff but this was good. I'd like to imagine the sibs staying together and daddy staying away from Clara. But mom can join in when dads not around. Five stars.

I love incest stories where the whole family get involved. Five stars

all those idiots complaining about dad, he/she wrote so many different stories, don't like this one, just read 10 other stories. You need a bit of variations. Dad/Daughter isn't my thing either, same with mom/son, I'm more the brother/sister fan, but this author writes good stories, I really like them. Hell he even made a gay scene nice to read, not my thing either... Who cares..

Five stars again, on to the next story...

An excellent plot on different levels. Sometimes it is just easier to sit down and discuss what everyone wants upfront without the subterfuge. But it would not be as interesting a story😉

Brother, mother, sister, aunt - Yum!

CINCO ESTRELLAS!