All Comments on 'Camping Trip'

I thoroughly enjoyed your camping trip tale. I thought it was a beautiful little romantic story.

I really enjoyed this story it pulled me in. Made me feel like I was one of the persons in the story.

Enjoyable, thanks

I liked your little love story very much, Amigo. Thank you much for your story.

Great story! but a lil feedback... find an editor, it'll be worth your wild

Total load of crap

This would have been an excellent story if you had an editor. Use "come" instead of "cum" and "through" instead of "thru." Perfect spelling and grammar focuses the reader on the story and not on the words. Good effort, keep posting! :)

Numerous times you write "cloths" instead of "clothes", as one example out if many.

Also, more character development would have helped

I was underwhelmed by this story. The “Romance” part of this story seemed more like a fait accompli. Just not the way I like a story to go, I like a little foreplay before getting too serious.

You really needed a beta or a spell check program.

so so,,,